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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
Your fic is damn sweet Pinks. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
atlast thoda to lamba banaya... now slowly slowly make it bigger nd bigger... so it will be very long soon......
besides this ur fic. rocks...... such a gud writer... 😃 and where is uv? u kept me thinking ❓ ... i really liked it.... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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shirin plz plz plz conti 2day only na 😊
i cant wait , da suspense is killin me 😆
plz yaar, ur fic is just AWESUM
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
thnx a lot guyz will surely continue 2 day 😳 😉 😃 ......divs u dunno wer is uv hw wil u take him 😉 😳 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65

kewwwwwwwl fanficcc!!!! U rock shiruuuu!!!!
-Ria

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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
awsome 👏 👏 👏 .its really gud.cont fast 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awsome 👏 👏 👏 .its really gud.cont fast 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey shirin nice part yaar
n continue soon
ur fic rocks 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 5

Ashi got tensed ..... but den she started shouting again.....

A: uv!!! common out , d game is ovr..

but still no reply... ashi got worried.....

A: hey bhaggu.. uv wer r u ?????

she went 2 her room 2 figure out wer uv must b.. she sat all nite thinking but still cudnt cum up vit ne thing .....

next morning ashi called up her mother soniya ray....

A: mamma!

S: kya hua mammam u sound tensed?

A: mamma uv!

S: ab uv ne tumhare saath kya kiya ? me use nahi chodungi!

A: no mom! uv is missing! kal mene kuch use keh diya tha aur nw he is missing... pls kuch karo mom...plz...

S:mammam tumme aisa nahin karna chaiye tha. me kuch karti hu dont worry....

for days ashi din eat ne thing she kept thinking about uv...

nw all wer worried about uv as well ashi n her health....

aftr a few dayz soniya ray came...

S: mammam. sorry ! kuch pata nahin chala

A: mom i knew it! sirf me hi uv ko dhundh kar laaungi. u all r good 4 nothing...

S: shona aisa mat kaho. chalo hum ek vacation ke liye jaate hai. u need 1.

A: mom yaha par uv missing hai aur aap vacations ke baare me soch rahe hai.....uv kaha hoga.....

den suddenly d cell phone rings of ashi....

IT IS NONE OTHER DAN UV!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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phew long part 😆 4 nitz esp. 😃 pls ppl tell me hw is it 😕 is it bad or boring 😕 pls post ur comments

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