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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
hey shirin

i read all da 3 parts 2gether
they r just awesum

take these claps frm my side 👏

plz do continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
HEY SHIRIN!ITS AWESOME!PLEASE WRITE LONGER PARTS! WILL B WAITIN 4 D NXT PART!

SANOBER 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

Chapter 4

Ashi cudnt sleep dat nite ....she kept thinking about uv...

she said 2 herself....

A:Uv i m very sry.. mujhe aisa nahin karna chaiye tha.lekin wat shud i do???? mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. i luv u uv.............duh-uh u no dat na!!!! lekin dis is not r destiny......

Next day ashi wakes up soon.... only she n vrinda wer der in hr room....

she tells vrinda...

A: mate i think i shud apologise 2 uv. mujhe aisa nahin karna chaiye tha. lekin i shud tell him dat dis is not d end of his life... he shud move on....

V: ashi but what can he do??? tum hi uski life ho!!!!!

A: gyanmata tumhari gyan ban karo!

den ashi quickly goes away.....

V: ye ashi bhi na!

ashi goes 2 uv's room.....

she dusnt find ne 1 der....

so she goes 2 d cafeteria 2 find sid.....

A: sid! do u no wer uv is???

S: ashi me bhi worried hu. mene uv ko kal se nahin dekha aur uska guitar bhi nahi hai..

A: o! thnx ne wyz.

den ashi goes evrywer in search of uv....she searched d whole of maurya but still din find him.....she even asked yashwant dev but he wsnt der.....

den ashi says

A: only i no wer u r!!!!!!!!

she goes 2 d shed......n says softly........

A: uv!!!!! i m sry.. common... mene poore maurya me tumhara search kiya ...... see im d only 1 who find u!!!!!!!!!!

BUT UV WSNT DER.................................

Edited by coolpinks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
pls pls tell me hw is it 😕 its a bit long i suppose 😉 😃 😳 pls tell me shud i make dis a long fic or a short 1 😕 😕 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
hey make it a longgggggggggggggggggggggggg one coz its beautiful the best fic i ever read and plz post the next part asap abhi 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
thnxxxxxx a lot 😃 😃 😳 no mre replies 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
amazzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiggggggg fic...........awesome........ 👏

where is my poor yuvi........he must be soooo sad.... 😭


and make it a really really really longgggg fic... 😛 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey p[lzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzm cont shirin cont fassssssssssssssssssssssst
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
c i told u continue soon or else i'll take Yuvi wid me 😉

continue soon 😳 😳

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
hi,i jus read ur whole fic now.its rockinh.plz continue fast

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