deepinsidemyheart(my 1st fic.plz c prt11) - Page 4

ya shirin plz rite longer 😊
nd ha conti fast ok 😆 ,i cant wait 😆

niyati yaar ur punishment is totally fair
now miss shirin
u have to write LONG LONG PARTS
' 😆 '

omg il try but il surely continue 2day 😉 😆 😃

wow wonderful fic yaar
rocking
mindblowing
fantabulous
connti asap

HEY common continue plzzzzzzz it ROCKS 👏 👏 👏

Chapter 3

Yuvi gazes at ashi n softly says....

Y: ashi!!!!!! me har waqt tumhare baare me hi sochta hu.mere life me sirf 3 things important hai , tum ,music aur mom.lekin pehle tum ashi phir mom aur music.pls try 2 undrstnd ashi. ab to mujhe 4 giv karo.

A: uv me tum par jab har baar trust kar thi hu, tum mujhe betray karte ho.

Y: lekin ashi i no tum mujhse kitna pyar karti ho! i can see that!

A: nahi uv me tumse PYAR KARTI THI lekin ab nahin. pls let me go.

Y: pls ashi , mujhe last chance do.

A: sry yuvi its not possible

Den ashi quickly goes away......

Yuvi still standing in d doorway became very sad n his eyes wer filled wit tears.He kept telling dis 2 himself,....................

SRY ASHI, ILL NEVR 4GIV MYSELF 4 DIS......IL NEVR 4 GIV MYSELF 4 DIS .... NEVR

hey man it is an awsome fic it is just gr8
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast
i dont read fix but urs one is realy good
kleep it up 👏

thnx a lot tia....im very glad that u liked it.....😊 ppl hw is it 😕 pls post ur comments ... vud luv 2 hear 4rm u so i cn continue

hey pinks is gr8888888888 its just awesom never came across such beautiful ashi- yuvi pic its awesom plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont i cant w8 👏

amazing Shirin

but plzz... give Yuvi a second chance b4 i take him away 😉 😆 😳 cant c him in tears 😭

Divya