When the east meets the west-updated pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok friends here is the next part...

PART 4

Vish skips the stair and falls onto someone….
"Oh stupid!cant you see?r u blind or just ……"
Vish stands up and says.
Anna says"calm down Vish, he is….."
Vish doesn't look at the person and says,"What he is…"
Anna just tells her in sign to look behind
Vish looks and a different glow comes in her eyes "you!Vishw!looser yaha bhi why are you following me?"
Vishw Oberoi –he is also an Indian and he is the Manager of the well-known " Indian Caf" in Lndon
He just smiles and with the words"I am extremely sorry mam"he leaves the place

Anna-Vish lagta nahi na ki is ladke ne do din pehle tumhe prapose kiya tha?
V-please don't talk about him
A-why?why not?I know Vish you…
V-I what?
A-You love him
V-oh shut up maine tumhe aur use bhi mera decision bata diya hai ok?
And Vish goes for her radio show
A-what a girl I don't believe ke yeh meri friend hai aur koi ise love kar sakata hai
Someone says"Kar sakta hai Anna !"
Anna-oh Vishw
Vishw-kar sakta hai kya kare is dil ko kaun samja sakta hai
Both laughs..
A-friendly speaking Vishw please forget her please you are wasting your time on her
Vishw-I don't believe you are saying this I mean you are her friend and you know she loves me
A-ya she loves you lekin wo aise rishton me believe nahi karti wo kabhi ise accept hi nahi karegi ki she really loves you usne apne dil me kya kya bhare rakha hai ye tum imagin nahi kar sakte
Vishw-but why?
A-because usne aise experience kiye hai ki..
Vishw-kya?
A-ya kehna to nahi chati thi lekin keh rahi hoon usne ek bahot bure accident me apni poori family kho di-India me
Vishw-what?
A-it's the fct wo bahot akeli thi hum yani me aur maddy waise bhi yaha studies ke liye anewale the to use le aye
Is liye ki wo sab bhule lekin wo to aur bhi paththardil ban chuki hai wo aaj tak nahi bhool payi and ab to wo ye believe karne lagi hai ki dil ke rishte hi sadness ki jad hai
Vishw-now I got it ki kyu wo dill ki bat man ne se darti hai
A-i think you understood everything.but don't tell her about our conversation
Vishw-oh don't you worry I wont
Anna goes leaving Vishw alone in his thoughts

Vishw calls Vish and invite her for a dinner
Vish-you know I wont come
Vishw cut the phone saying"I am sure you will dear!"
Neetaldesai thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey people
please post your comments pleaseeeeee 😊
Neetaldesai thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think i should end the fic cause none is readin it 😭
kutie thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its too cool.plz cont soon.and ya plz dont stop ur fic for atleast the ones who all are reading.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey neetal di ur fic just rox
it is awsome 😊
mindblowing 😛
mindblasting 😉
collest 😃
sufiest 😆
and teh best 😳
plzzzzzzzzz neetal di cont fast cant wait 4 the 5th part
and one thing i realy like abt the fic is that it is a bit hatke and your anme selection is awsome 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: tia_5

hey neetal di ur fic just rox
it is awsome 😊
mindblowing 😛
mindblasting 😉
collest 😃
sufiest 😆
and teh best 😳
plzzzzzzzzz neetal di cont fast cant wait 4 the 5th part
and one thing i realy like abt the fic is that it is a bit hatke and your anme selection is awsome 👏

thanks dear thanks a lot

i was waiting for you only 😊

Neetaldesai thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank you everyone
specially ritwika,divya and kutie 😊
komal_ashiyuvi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
hey neetal

its cool yaar

plz jaldi continue kar ok
2kool thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
ur fic is damn cool
continue soon
Neetaldesai thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
here is the next part....
PART 5

"Rain is falling…. Madhdham madhdham mitti ki khusboo ….cool wind……..and halka halka sa nasha … kuch bhi nahi badla
Wohi ghane badal,…..chattering of the birds……aur wohi monsoon ka ek normal day
Phir bhi nujhe aaj sub kuch alag sa lag raha hai why? Why?"

A girl is talking with herself sitting in a lonely garden mark "lonely" cause all are in the class yes you got it right she is missing the class don't know why?who is she ?ya she is ashi
Ashi doesn't know that she is heard by someone…..

That someone comes near ashi and says"shayad tomhe love ho gaya hai'
A-"mate!no and shut up"
V-ok ok but tum mano ya na mano tumhe ishq to zaroor hua hai varna koi upne aap se bate nahi karta aur wobhi itni important class ko miss karke soooo
A-stop your bakwas mate
V-moreover ashi mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki tumhe kisse love hua hai
A-what?I think mujhe tumhara nam mate se mate bhavishyachari rakh dena chaiye
V-wo tum jano as you wish lekin ye alag wali baat aaj yuvi se milne ke bad hi ho rahi hai na?don't lie ok?
A-ha par mera yuvi me interest impossible bat hai
V-ok as you say par ab chale I am badly hungry pleaseee
A-ok let's go

Now they are in canteen

Ashi is thinking on which vrinda has told her just few minutes ago lekin mujhe yuvi se yuvi se……
V-ashi kaha kho gayi?
A-kuch nahi bas mujhse yuvi ki halat nahi dekhi jati
V-kyun use kya hua accha khasa to hai
A-nooo yeh boom ka performance uska akhri performance hai
V-what?
A-ya uske dad ne use mana kar diya hai
V-oh sad ha

Varun comes and says"vrinda if you don't mind mujhe kuch notes chahiye"
A-vrinda you go I am waiting
V-ok I just come
Let's go varun
They went and ashi is thinking"I think mamma ko phone karti hoon shayad who kuch kare
She is calling her mumma
A-mumma
S-oh mumum I am so glad you have called me kya hua shona?
A-mumma I wanna meet you please
S-mumum what's wrong
A-nothing mumma aap aa rahi hai ki main aapko lene aeroplane bheju ?
S-ok mumum I am coming
A-come soon bye
S-bye shona

Soniya is thinking "kya hua ashi ko kabhi itni tensed behave nahi karti"
Pata nahi
She told kuki"meri sari appointments cancel karo
I am going to meet mumum……. And she went

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