When the east meets the west-updated pg 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys i am starting a fic please comment on it....

When The East Meets The West

PART 1

Mohe Rang De Basanti Rang De Basnti Rang De Basanti Yarrraaaaa………..

What a gentle voice, Sweet face. Long nice hair. Clothes Fully Western. Who is she? Who is this girl?

Eyes like a deer's eyes. Anyone would surely like to get into the deepest sea of her eyes.

She is looking completely awesome, beautiful and sweet.

But she is not as nice as she is looking…..

She is singing the song Mohe Rang De Basanti………….

But still the question is there. Who is she?

Well she is a girl who never afraid of anything. A girl who does every thunder and thrill.

A girl who enjoys being rude. A girl whom our parents would never like.

The only good thing in her is her love for India and Her Friends.

She is sitting on some hill and having a cigar. Strange a girl with a cigar?

She lives in London and from foot to head she is a bad spoilt English girl.

She is singing the song and thinking………..

"There is something in this song. There is a different feeling in this song, which fills me with pride and respect for India. Why? Why? This song attracts me this way that I forget everything. My job, my friends, Anna, Maddy,………and…and……. Vishw…. that looser"

Suddenly there is a rainfall. "Stupid you! You will never let me relax na? Ok do as you wish fine?" she said pointing to God.

Suddenly she looks into her watch and "Oh no! It's 7:30 a.m."

"Run Vish! Run you are getting late"

And she starts running…

It happens almost everyday in her life.

She left his cigar on the hill. She didn't know that she was being watched….

Please tell me . Should i continue or not?

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kutie thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its good neetal.but of whichcouple the fic is.and plz cont.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey your fic is mixture of kya hog nimmo kaa nd aisa des haiu mera neways its fantastiiic gr888888888 cont fast neetal 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's wonderful 👏 ! Do continue 😃 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well kutie it's a fic for both the couples
tia and ranveer
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ashi and yuvi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ITS REALLY COOL!!CONTINUE ASAP 😊
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cool fic neetal
plz continue soon
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hey its totally rocking
plz continue soon
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ok i'll post the next part tommorrow or maybe tonight
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here you go the next part....


PART 2

"Hey!where is Vish?yaar!I 'll kill her"

"but why?what happened"

"Anna!wo mera cell le gayi hai aur abhi tak loti nahi.How can I go office without my cell?"

"Vish had choosen your name right "maddy" you are totally mad"

"Why?"

"Stupid call on your cell and tell her to come fast"

"yaaaaaaaaa"

Maddy aka Madhavi who is the best friend of Vish is about to call Vish and…..

"Girls what happened?itni dhoom kyun macha rakhi hai?"

Anna said,"Vish tum par se Hindi Songs and Films ka bhoot kab utarega"

V-"stop it Anna"

(Anna aka Anamika which is also the best friend of Vish)

M-"tum dono yeh fight bad me karna pehle Vish mera cell do"

V-"take it. It's in my purse"

M-"bye girls"

V and A- "Bye"

V-"oh no !I am also late"

A-"go and get ready I am waiting for you in the parking"


This is the house of that girl. I think this is the only house in London, which has this masti, this liveliness, and these emotions of the Indians! Even their house name is "India"! This is the only house when Hindi is spoken so fluently and so often.
I think yehi to bat hai humare India me.

A-"Vishhhhhhhhhhhhh! Come fast I am late!"
V-"coming yar! Chill ok?"

Vish comes and they are going to their office, I mean their radio station "Indian Voice"

Vish aka Vishakha Sharma is the radio jockey and Anna is assistant of the manager there


They reached their office and goes upstairs and Vish skips the stair and falls onto someone….



Edited by Neetaldesai - 19 years ago

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