When the east meets the west-updated pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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NEETAL UR TOOO GUD AT IT.CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good. continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its very gud
its really cool 😉
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE KARO NA PLZZZZZZ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok here is the next part....

PART 3

In maurya ……..

Why? Why? This always happens to me why?what's your problem ha?why do you always stop your finger on me?why do you always pour all your bad luck on me only ha?

Yuvi is thinking this and talking to god ….

Suddenly sid comes and sees the scene
Hahahahhahaha…..haaaaa..

Y-"hey sid why are you laughing dude?"
S-"haaa haaaaa"
Y- hey tum ashi psyco ki tarah kyun behave kar rahe ho?stop ok otherwise I'll kill you
S-ok dude par tum devdas kyun bane hue ho?what's wrong?
Y-everything everything is happening wrong dad ne mujhe yeh last performance ka chance diya hai….phir no band no performance no remix
S- what boom tumhara last performance hai?

Yuvi just going to give answer and some one comes

"yuvi ka ? remix ka last performance sid"

yuvi and sid turns back and
y-"why ashi?mere bina remix chal sakata hai mere jaise to bahot milenge hai na?"
A-(with tears)-no yuvi I was wrong you are the best don't feel so
S- I think mujhe jana chahiye yuvi bad me ata hoon ok?

Sid goes and..
Y-ashi please tum mujhe akela chod do
A-hey bhaggu typical diolog
Y-ashi this is not a joke tum kabhi serious nahi ban sakti?remix means my life how can I live without it and without….
A-and without?
Yuvi is about to say"without you ashi I love you"
But he doesn't
Y-forget it prob ye hai ki I am leaving it
Ashi holds yuvi's hand and very softly says"I am our friend true?"
Yuvi looks into her eyes and says"ya'
A-then trust on me iwill never loose you
Y-loose me?means?
A-(blushing and confused)-I … I …mean tum remix ke liye ho aur hamesha rahoge..
Ashi goes
Yuvi-why don't you tell me that you love me ha?stupid wacko?
Yuvi gives a sweet smile and plays his guitar….
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey people thanks for replying and sorry for the delay 😊
keep reading the fic and do comment 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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soooo sweet....... 😳

so ashi-yuvi back again....... 😳 😳

amazing part.......loved it.... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank you all specially divya
liked your comments 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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will post the next part soon
but there is only 3 replies 😭
no one is reading my fic 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey neetal i m reading n its just
MIND BLASTING
u r going on the rite track dear
keep it up

n ya continue soon

luv
sonam

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