When the east meets the west-updated pg 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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grt part neetal...and cont soon...
but plz have a scene between tia n ranny also...plz...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
but no one is reading it 😭
may be coz of the bad news of the week -remix ending 😭

for that i thought i post a new part and cheer you up but see no one is reading 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no neetal they are just a littloe tensed up...
if u will cont they will definately cheer up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey naaaatal di sorry 4 the late reply i loved it it is awsome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey naaaatal di sorry 4 the late reply i loved it it is awsome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey naaaatal di sorry 4 the late reply i loved it it is awsome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey naaaatal di sorry 4 the late reply i loved it it is awsome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oppppppppppppppppppppssssssssssssssss 5 times 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks a lot kutie divya ritwika and all 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey here is the next part

PART 7

Ton ton ton…..

"oh god ab tum hi batao main kya karu ?us looser se milne jau ya nahi?waise to main tumhe hate karti hoon lekin maddy aur anna kehte hai ki tum hi sab kuch handle karte ho
so I came here to solve my confusion"

A girl is in church and praying to god with a candle she is just like that candle holy,innocent but wild and rebellious ya she is Vishakha aka Vish

Suddenly the church bell rings ton ton ton…

Two people are talking near Vish they said "our wish will come treue soon because I asked the god and he rang the bell in sign of saying yes"
V-"oh no ab tum bhi un anna and maddy ki tarah yes bol rahe ho?"

She thinks for a while and decides to go to meet Vishw……

She goes to meet vishw but he didn't come
Vish waited for a long but he didn't come

"looser ana nahi tha to bulaya kyun?"

she got up and went to her home angrily

Maddy-Hey Vish date kaisi rahi ha?
Anna-kya hua why are you don't speking a word?
Vish-"wo nahi Aya"he didn't come
With tears in her eyes she went in balcony with saying"don't follow me leave me alone please"

Maddy and Anna slept and Vish is just talking to god
"maine tumse kuch bhi kaha tha jab tumne mera sab kuch chin liya tha?ha?
I accepted everything everything.Why are you not leaving me ha?mere hi dil me koi Tamanna Jagate ho aur mujhe top pe lejake dhhakka dete ho mujhe aise girate ho ki meri tamanna ka namonishan nahi rehta har baar aisa kyun?why you are doing this to me"

And she started cigar…………

I think mujhe aunty ko call karna chahiye she takes the phone and calls her aunty

Aunty-hello?
V-helo aunty Vish here
Aunty-shona kaha se bol rahi ho are you in India?
V-nooo soniya aunty(and she started crying)
Aunty-kya hua?
V-i wanna come there please aunty mujhe India wapas ana hai
Aunty-ok shona jaldi aao ok?and please don't cry maddy aur anna ko bhi le ana thik hai?
V-ok bye
A-bye

Soniya cut the phone and thought"ise kya ho gaya?"

Soniya ray is Vishakha's aunty.Her mother's Closest friend and her loving guide friend everything in India…..

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