I will be waiting-(T&R)-Fic-Pt 4-Pg 6

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I will be waiting

Sometimes she just liked to stare out of the window.. she never felt like doing anything these days.. propped up on her pillow.. she looked out at a beautiful sight. It was one of the most beautiful spring mornings when the sun was gleaming over the first flowers which have blossomed. The first sign of greenery was beginning to show. The meadows which lay in front of her were taking on a healthy green colour.. and the snow was starting to melt. .. there was a bit of cloud on the sky and the ground smelt fresh and new.. and green.. he used to say, " greenery is good for your eyes. Green things have a lot of Vitamin A and less glaze. That's why people who live in high mountain lands tend to have healthy eyes." She believed him. That's why they had moved to this place a couple of years back.

Where was he now? She wondered. Two months after they had come, he had gone as usual for his morning walk. He never returned. She somehow knew that he hadn't died. He had once said, " I promise that I will never die until you are by my side." And since his disappearance she had been completely alone. She never went out again, the only time she left her bed was when she had to eat. She always slept with his picture clasped to her bosom. Every phone call filled her heart with terror and expectance. Every time her doorbell rang, she expected it to be him, standing there with a bouquet of flowers especially for her.. but all that was just her dream.. she knew he would never come back.

But she also knew that she would wait here for him.. as long as she lived.. in the faintest and vaguest of hopes that one day she will see him again. Once again he will stand in front of her and swoop down to kiss her forehead.. and give her an invaluable present, be it a flower or a dress.. and say, "Yeh hum aapke liye layen hai Tia."

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzz tell me if its good 😕 .. this idea came to me last night.. and i thought of posting it..
i could discontinue at once if you tell me to .. dont worry about that.. and i will also continue my other fic as soon as possible 😊

also its a pretty small fic so i can just stop if you want me too.. and its esp for the tia ran fans who are upset cuz of their break up

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i lyk it evn though i dont read tr fics

its kinda interesting
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesome 👏
please continue fast.its a big relief from the ongoing story 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u know wat shreyasi i just have one word 2 say "awesome"u wont beleive it but u expressed tia emotions so beautifully

But she also knew that she would wait here for him.. as long as she lived.. in the faintest and vaguest of hopes that one day she will see him again. Once again he will stand in front of her and swoop down to kiss her forehead.. and give her an invaluable present, be it a flower or a dress.. and say, "Yeh hum aapke liye layen hai Tia."

i luved this part a lot 😃

tnks a lot shreyasi i guess this is wat we all tia ranny fans need at this moment 😃 thnk u so much 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooooooow shreyasi....i neva read tr fics....but urs....its jst lubli 😃
i think urs is gonna b the first tr fic tht ill read 😆😊
cont soon k 😉
and dont forget one charm forevr 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice.........continue soon..........waiting for the next part


kittuu 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!!
its reallly kool 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow ....very nicely ritten dear
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Posted: 19 years ago
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All these thoughts of him made her more desperate. She couldn't wait any longer. It was spring the second time round after he had disappeared. What had happened to him? she thought.. the memory of that day was vividly clear to her. She had waited until noon for his return with an increasing feeling of uneasiness. Then she had gone rushing out checking for him. She had shouted out his name number of times. She knew the route he normally took. She had been there several times, to find nothing. No indication that a person has gone missing from there..

Desperately she had come back home expecting him to be there waiting for her.. so that she could snuggle in his arms. But he wasn't there. The house was vacant, just as she had left it.. and as he had left, he had taken all feeling of love, trust and security from the house.. She didn't feel secure there anymore, she didn't feel loved and certainly, she didn't feel happy.

Desperately she took the cordless phone and for the thousandth time dialed his number. She had called him on his cell so many times before and has even left messages, but she never got a callback from him. Today some instinct told her to call again. She knew it would be helpless. She punched in the numbers with a surging feeling of rage.. she hated him.. hated him for leaving her helplessly for almost two years.. hated him because she was so lonely.. hated him because of her exuberant love for him.. hated him because no matter how far he was, there was never a moment when he wasn't there in her heart. He had once promised that he would never leave her alone.. but he had. Please Ranveer, she prayed, please just once, please come back to Tia. And for a moment she thought he was there behind here.. brushing her hair and resting his head against her soft skin.. she felt his soft and gentle breathing behind him.. and on an impulse she turned back.. there was no one… and she loved him beyond words.. beyond imagination.. beyond what the human heart would perceive….

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And at the same time a thousand miles away, cursing destiny's cruelty he was thinking about his loving wife, who under all her layers of make up and artificiality could lift his mood just by her charming smile.. he missed her sweet and innocent words.. and he missed the anxious and serious way she used to ask about her dress.. but most of all.. he missed her..

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