I will be waiting-(T&R)-Fic-Pt 4-Pg 6 - Page 3

AWESOME
FANTABULOUS
MIND BLOWING
MINDBLASTING
OUT OF THE WORLD
ECSTATIC
ROMANTIC

jus continue shreyasi pls...

seriously guys should i continue or not?? plzz tell me if its good.. i have the feeling ppl dont like it 😕

no no dont stop!!!!!cont fast its really very nice 👏
but one thing.....why have you written her her for both?? 😕 mistake kya?

ya shreyasi i luved it 😃 😃 can i ask u sumthing are u dng nething in literature coz u write amazingly well

pls do continue 😃

Originally posted by: vitak

no no dont stop!!!!!cont fast its really very nice 👏
but one thing.....why have you written her her for both?? 😕 mistake kya?

😕😕 i didnt get you.. if its a mistake plzz tell me and i will edit my post

Originally posted by: devilangel

he opened and closed his mouth several times.. dying to say the three words which once had been so effective on her.. but she was the one who broke up with her.. she was the one who fought with her.. she was the one who humiliated her.. yet she was the one who loved her..

"No.. I didn't."

they both seemed to know nothing to talk about.. There was a wall of awkwardness and formality between them .. one of them had to break down the wall, but they neither had the courage nor the strength needed for that..

"So I guess you have been working late." For the first time she looked up at her.. with eyes full of concern.. and maybe they hinted a slight feeling of guilt..

"

are you talking about ranveer and tia or is it someone else????????

sorry if i mistook😊

heyy thxxxx for teling it re 😳 😳 . i edited my post

thxxxxx a ton again 😃 😃

hey...here is my honest opinion

this is very very very beautiful...amazingly well written

so lets have the next part soon 😃

your welcome 😳 and your story is really very nice.beautifully written 👏

its extremely gr8 shreyasi...but the problem is i cant tell which one is better...this 1 or one charm forever...
both awesome!!!!!!!
continue both fast

the special n unique part of this fic is tht such a subject or storyline has never been written abt...long frw to whr u take it mate!

waitin!!!!