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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
its ossim must say.and plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
hey your fic is really rocking but can you do a favor??
everytime you post a part plzzzz add that to your title so we can read faster
cuz you know me is lazyP:P
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
hey MP

very nice

plz continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hey guys..thx a ton 4 ur responses..sorry 4 d delay..had gone 4 a one day holiday..neway am back wid the next part..

once back in the room, ashi rounded up on vrinda-"hey maate, maine tumse kahaan tha na ki darvaaze par nazar rakhna...tumne bataya kyun nahi ki jumbo aa raha hai??" ashi yelled
"ashi, mere saamne sid woh list le kar bhaaga tha..mujhe laga ki tum log bhi bahaar aate hi honge kyun ki list ussne le lee thi..is liye main uske piche baaghi magar voh nikal gaya..ab tum log kya karoge??" she asked
"well, sabse pehle toh punishment khatam ho jaye, phir unn dono ko dekh lenge..and i bet sab ladke woh list ab tak dekh chuke honge..anyway, kuch toh karna hi padega" andy said as she slumped on her bed
soon enough it was evening and ashi andy yuvi n sid were standing at the entrance of d storeroom..the room was damn smelly n dark...
"uggghh!!! i cant believe jumbo ne hume yeh room de di! yuck..main yahaan suffocoate ho jaoongi yaar!!" andy exclaimed clutching her nose to avoid smelling the room
"well, i dont care..list toh mil gayi..manipulate bhi kar li! ab toh jo bhi ho dekha jayega!" sid said and both yuvi n sid laughed n entered the room..
just as they were about to begin cleaning, the door suddenly slammed n got jammed..everyone was wondering how d hell cud d door close by itself..it was s basement and so there were no windows, hence no wind..so the door cudn't get slammed by d wind. "BHOOOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!" screeched sid.."shuddup sid! darao mat.." ashi yelled back.
"RAT RAT RAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yuvi tumhaare piche theres a rat!!!" andy yelled and stood on a cupboard..
there was total confusion as sid ran to climb the cupboard, ashi trying to hide behind something and yuvi trying to climb d cupboard but not being able to do so becoz there was o space on the cupboard nemore..ashi got hold of a stick n threw it at yuvi.."yuvi, maaro use plz...!!" she pleaded..yuvi started looking for d rat jumping at the slightest sound..finally he did see the rat, he tried hitting it but it ran under the cupboard..both sid n andy fell off as they were jumping on the cupboard in fright! ashi found another stick and tried helping yuvi.finally sid n andy were covering in a corner hugging each other in fear while yuvi n ashi seemed to playin hockey..TO BE CONTINUED IN NEXT PART! 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
its awesom plz cont fast and romantic scenes b/w ashi uv bhi zarroor dalna its fantastic gr8 cool 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
hi mp
plz continue soon yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
hi mp
plz continue soon yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
mp wat happend yaar

why r u not writing

i m w8ing from past 3 weeks 😭

now u gotta do it okkkkk????? 😡

write it soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzz 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
hey mp..plz post the next part asap..please...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
MP TU KAHAAN CHALI GAYI JALDI CONT KAR IY HAS BEEN YEARS 😆 SINCE YOU CONTINUED LAST 😉

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