One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 36

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Posted: 19 years ago

thxx you guys soooooooo much!!!!

i am srry i have to end this because i am going to India next week.. but when I come back in September.. the remix forum wil still be there right? well. if it is.. then i will write the second part of my trilogy.. hope you like it!! and i will post the next part by tmrw!!!

love, shreyasi

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Posted: 19 years ago
it's a gr8 news u r coming to india,wow to meet ashi yuvi 😆 😉 😆 , just kidding.
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Posted: 19 years ago
cool shreyasi
yr fic is fantabulous
keep it up gal! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 23

And when the kiss ended a new era began.. the era of love!.. where he was her knight in a shining armor and she was the queen of his fairyland..
The broke the kiss due to the fact that they were gasping for breath..
'Yuvi?' she asked, ruffling his hair..
'Mhmm..' he was engrossed in her, and the smell of her shampoo was enticing enough to capture her attention.
'I am sorry to cause you all this trouble.'
And he looked into her eyes, and he saw sincerity and love.. this was the moment he always wanted.. this was the sole moment for which he always wanted to be thankful to God.. he knew this was the time.. it was now or never.. it was neither in a fancy restaurant, nor at a candlelit dinner, but it was the juncture of love.. and according to his opinion.. love mattered a lot more than either of those things.. the blazing sunshine accentuated the happiness in her eyes.. her chocolate eyes urged him to love her..
And slowly he got down on one knee to ask the very question which had turned his life apart. He knew that he was rushing through.. but something in her eyes just told him, they were made for each other..
'Anvesha.. I have known you for a long time. As friends, rivals, enemies, lovers, we have always been together. Today I would like to secure our bond.. secure the proof that you are my ray of sunshine. Anvesha Banerjee Ray, will you marry me?'
She didn't have to think twice to answer.. it was where her heart belonged.. it was where she would be happiest. And this time in his eyes there was no pleading..
'Yes.' She whispered.. eyes full of love..
And looking at her, he knew Cupid had struck again..
***
Everybody loves somebody sometime
Everybody falls in love somehow..
Something in your kiss just told me,
My sometime is now.
Everybody finds somebody sometime.
There is no telling where love may appear..
Something in my heart keeps saying..
My someplace is here.
If I had it in my power,
I would arrange for every girl to have your charm..
Then every minute, every hour
Every boy would find what I found in your arms..



Edited by devilangel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
err..how was it? srry for the font thing but there was something wrong with the computer!!! plzz comment and say if it is good or bad and whether you liked it!.. and the song is 'everybody loves somebody' by Dean Martin. plzz plzz comment cuz i love them lol..
love,
shreyasi
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Posted: 19 years ago
ohh amazing....brillaint work..i love d way he proposed..n tht cupid struck again line bowled it over...again mind u..but dont tell me dis is d end...plzz it cant be continue ur trilogy idea...waitin for tht...i guess im the first 2 reply..
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww, such a sweet part 👏

continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
Shreyasi,

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jus continue

dun keep us waiting 😭 😭

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
Liked it????? I loved it. It was so awesomely wrtten Shreyasi 👏The song in the end and Yuvi proposing was sooooooooo romantic 😳Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Well as ami onek onek din bade likchi, duto jinish bolbo, sorry etto din na lekhar jonno aar fic ta awesome bhabe sesh korechish( atleast mone to hocche je aei first part ta is over).
Ebar siggiri write the next part.

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