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Posted: 19 years ago
Part -24
Two weeks later, it was the day of their wedding. The day could not have been more beautiful, as the first day of spring dawned and the first flower blossomed. The sun shone brightly smiling happily at the happy couple-to-be.
It was going to be a quite, private ceremony with no one invited.. mainly because Ashi's mom lived too far away, and Yuvi was not in very good terms with the family.
Slowly the time o the wedding drew near. She was dressed in a flowing A-line white gown with sequins and pearls, and her hair was put up in a bun, with some strand which decorated her face. The clock ticked faster until it was time for the doors to open and she walked through the aisle.
Seeing her for the first time that day, his breath caught in his throat. She looked like a Goddess in that dress.. she looked like an angel who had come down to earth to bless him. And as she looked at him, she couldn't dream of a better husband. He was dressed in a tuxedo, with an ivory tie . his hair was slicked back and his eyes were moistened with love and happiness.. in all her life she had never felt more secure..
He escorted her to the dais where the priest was waiting for them. soon the ceremony began.
'Do you, Anvesha Banerjee Ray, take this man as your husband, and vow to be by him in sickness and in health, until death parts you?'
'This I do vow.' Her voice was starined with emotions and tears.. and she slipped the cool metal golden wedding ring on the third finger of her betrothed. 'Amor Immorteus' was plainly engraved on the ring meaning love forever.
'Do you, Yuvraj Dev, take this woman as your wife, and vow to be by her in sickness and in health, until death parts you?'
'This I do vow.' His voice was equally full of emotion as she slipped a cool ring extravagantly jeweled with a sapphire on her third finger.
'By the powers inflicted upon me by the church of France,' the minister continued, 'I now proclaim thee husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride.'
And as he eagerly pulled her into a kiss to seal this magical bonding, he couldn't help feeling how lucky and elated he was.
'Husband and wife.' I am his wife, she thought.. and I'm finally married to my love.
Slowly, hands entwined they walked out of the church, each feeling a rush of love and passion for the other, since their school days, they have come so far.. and at the end of the day, they both had to admit, it was always One Charm Forever.
----------The End------
Edited by devilangel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
It's Finished! Please comment you guys and tell me if you liked the whole story k? and plzzzz comment!!!!! even if its bad 😳 😛
..and plzz guys you have to vote for something else..
Do you want me to write 'When The Sun Goes Down'?
a) Yes
b) No
love you all and tell me for sure k?
love, shreyasi
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was awesom the best story io ever read wow.......................so emotional sooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful and soooooooooooooooooooo natural..............shreya thank you for such a lovely story and i owuld love to see a sequel tpo this story 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
yipee i am the first one to reply wow 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: remixer

it was awesom the best story io ever read wow.......................so emotional sooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful and soooooooooooooooooooo natural..............shreya thank you for such a lovely story and i owuld love to see a sequel tpo this story 👏

thxxx so much! for commenting sweetly throughout the story.. luv u for your encouragement throughout this..🤗🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago
its ok shreya thank you ki kya zaroorat
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey amazing!!!! read ur msn msg....gosh im sooo out of words...n loved the last line but not the last 2 words ' the end'...it cant be the end yaar...dis is so amazin...the sequel to dis is cumig soon i hope...it now tht u earn an amazing trip to india dear...enjoy throughly n think abt more brillant ideas for the trilogy, durin ur vacations...do try n get connected to rf n post ur parts if possible...n remem ill be wait...eagerly...mauhhhhhhh
here 3 cheers for the unforgettable fire 😉 of writing tht u hv... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
its really very nice ,especially da last line 😳

👏

n here goes my vote-
yes.

do rite 'when da sn goes down'
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Posted: 19 years ago
Really Nice Shreyasi 👏

Loved the last part 😳

n yes, plz start wid 'When The Sun Goes Down' SOON

cant wait 😳 😳

Luv - Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shreyashi,it was rocking as usual 👏
n pls start with-when the sun goes down 😳
luvya loads-sayanti

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