One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 22

Congrats! for cuming to 30 pages..!👏 👏 👏

Shreyasi.. plz continue soon..

Divya

congo dear
this part was mind blowing
keep it up shreyasi
get well soon

Part 14

'It's not unusual to be loved by anyone

It's not unusual to have fun with anyone

But when I see you hanging about with anyone

It's not unusual to see my cry..

I wanna die..'

He restlessly tossed and turned.. he wanted to go up and stop the radio blaring.. but he felt as if the song described his feelings.. the song clearly depicted what he felt.. it was as if it was coming from his own heart..

Tonight was the party in few hours. He knew Dr. Dev was going to be there. No points in guessing his date, he thought bitterly. He just wanted one chance with her.. one chance to show her that he loved her.. one chance to promise that he will always take care of her.. and always be there for her..

The first time he had turned around to face him was still vivid in her mind.. her face was quite frustrated because her luggage had been misplaced.. but the red streaks in her hair brought out the color of her eyes.. they made them look lovely.. she was like the blooming red rose in the garden.. waiting for her lover to come and caress her.. so that she could rest her head on his shoulder.. look into his eyes.. and tell him everything..

He didn't want to get these thoughts.. he wanted to face reality.. he wanted his life to continue.. but slowly he slipped back to his reverie..

***

She heard the doorbell of her studio chime just as she was finishing to dress. Tentatively she got up to open it.. to find the most handsome man dressed in a smashing black tux and suit, his hair jet black because he had gelled it, his well trained expert hands with a soft reddish tinge. He had a diamond ring on his finger.. and his well-polished shoes seemed to reflect her face.. he was carrying a bouquet of red roses..

***

He looked up to see the most marvelous looking woman smiling at him.. she was wearing a long black gown which crystals set all over them.. her matching emerald set brightened the color of her skin.. her black mascara and eyeliner.. matched with her brownish eye shadow.. brought out the color of her eyes.. and rouge enlightened her already bright and flushed cheeks.. her carefully manicured hands had a crystal Swarovski ring.. all in all she looked wonderful..

***

He held out his hand to her.. and blushing slightly she accepted.. together they went out of the door.. outside to the official party.. to their future.. to face the rest of the world.. holding hands..

***

He jumped out of bed once he saw the time.. it was almost time for the party.. he sighed and decided to leave Ashi out of her mind. Why don't you understand Ashi, he thought, why don't you understand that I love you.. I want you more than anything.. its not unusual Ashi.. It's not unusual to find out that I'm in love with you..

'Love will never do what you want it to..

why can't this crazy love be mine..'

***

After half and hour.. the official party had officially begun..

guys thxx for all your comments and sweet stuff.. really will miss you guys but i will continue my fic.. so this was the next part..

a lot of the lyrics are from Tom Jones 'Its not unusual'
plzz comment and tell me whether it good or bad.. 😛 😛
love always,
shreyasi

itsssssss wonderfuuuulll
lovely part yaar
really nice
i'm feelin so proud to be the first 1 to reply 😉
conti sooo dear
p.s : its written by u how can it be bad yaar

awesome...continue soon...i m 2nd 1 to reply

its really really nice i just read all of it 👏
cont soon plzzz 😊
i'm 3rd 2 reply 😊

amazing Shreyasi!

will miss u n ur fanfic..

cum back soon!

n continue soon

Divya

thxx i wil try to cont fast 😃 😛

u better... 😉 😆 ...so cont. fast...