A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33)

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vanu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#181

ok......waiting for the next part eagerly...... 😃

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Saloni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#182

thnx vanu...tho i guess ur the only 1!!! 😭

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sayantika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#183

hey sal,main bhi hoon 😳 😃 ,its not 1 its 2 😳 😳

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ritushree sarkar

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Posted: 19 years ago

#184

plz post d next part very soon.we all r waiting.

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Saloni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#185

ok here is the next part..have fun

WELL WELL...THIS IS HOW THE STORY GOES NOW

TIA AND RANVEER REACH COLLEGE....EVEN SHY AND RAGHU GO TO TO MAURYA..WHEN THEY SEE EVERYONE IN A HURRY..GOING TO THE HALL

TIA-AREY..MEHER..LISTEM..TUM SAB KAHAAN JAA RAHE HO?
MEHER=-BABES..CHALO..JUMBO NE SABKO BULAAYA HAI..

THEY ALL GO THE HALL..WELLL...EVERYONE IS THERE..TIA,RAN,UV,ASHI,SHY,RAGHU,SID,VRINDA,NAKUL,AMAN,PRI,M EHER,MP,LATTY...AND SO ON

JUMBO-STUDENTS...MERI BAAT SHYAAN SE SUNO...GUMNE NEXT WHOLE WEEK KE LIYE TUM SAB KE LIYE EK BRILLIANT HOLIDAY PLAN KIYA HAI..
TIA-HOLIDAY..COOL
ASHI-WOW SIR...ARE YOU SURE AAP JUMBO..OOPS..I MENA JAMBHWAL SIR HI HAI??
JUMBO-ASHI..PLEASE MERI BAAT SUNO..
JUMBO-TUM SAB KAL SUBAH YEHI ASSEMBLE HONA..HUM EK BAHUT PRETTY ISLAND PAR JAA RAHE HAI
SID-OH COOL!!!!

IN TIA'S ROOM

MEHER-TIA...HOW EXCITING NAH..
TIA-YAH BABES..TIA BAHUT EXCITED HAI
PRI-MAIN BHI..CHALO CHALO JALDI PACKING KARO...

THE NEXT MRNING THEY ALL MEET THERE...

JUMBO-GREAT..AB SHYAANS E SUNO..WE HAVE TO TRAVEL BY BUS FOR A LONG TIME..ISLIYE AAP SAB APNE APNE HEALTH KE LIYE,,U KNOW
TIA-UGH! BUS MAIN..HOW TACKY!!
JUMBO-AB AAP SAB APNE APNE PARTNER CHOOSE KAR LIJIYE
TIA-BABES...KYA TIA RANVEER KE SAATH JAA SAKTI HAI??
PRI-OF COURSE TIA!!
RANVEER-TIA..CHALE
ASHI-UH..AB MAIN KISKI PARTNER BANUOONGI..
UV-ASHI..PLEASE BE MY PARTNER
ASHI-UH..
M.P-ITS OK ASHI..TUM JAO..MEREKO VRINDA KI COMPANY HAI..

SHYLA-OH GOD!...AB MAIN KISKI PARTNER BANOONGI
LATTY-SHYLA...MAIN HOON NA..I GUES..HUMKO SAATH REHNA PADEGA..

WELL....RAGHU IS NOT COMING TO THE PARTY..OK

NOW NOW..THEY ALL SIT IN THE BUS..ENJOY AND REACH THE MOST BEAUTIFUL ISLAND ANYONE HAD EVER SEEN

TIA-OH WOW RANNY...KITNI PRETTY JAGAH HAI NAH
RANNY-HAAN HAI..LEKIN TIA SE ZYAADA NAHI..
TIA- 😳 😳 😳

JUMBO-AB SUNO..HUM JO HOTEL MAIN REHNE JAA RAHE HAI..WOH UNDER REPAIRING HAI..US HOTEL KE OWNERS HAI MR.SAHIL AUR MS.ANU..PLEASE UNHE KSI BHI TARAH SE PARESHAAN MAT KARNA..I HOPE ASHI AAP SUN RAHI HAI

ASHI-DONT WORRY SIR..ASHI RAY HONA KOI AISI VAISI BAAT THODI HAI!!
TIA-OH SHUT UP YOU RED-HEAD PUNK!!
JUMBO-GIRLS..PLEASE..CHALO

THEY REACH A HOTEL...WHICH LOOKS QUITE GOOD..BCOS SOME OF IT IS YET UNDER CONSTRUCTION

SHASHANK-CHALO..
WHILE THEY ARE MOVING THEY SEE TWO PEOPLE STANDING THERE

SHASHANK-YEH HAI SAHIL AUR ANU...AUR YEH MAURYA HIGH KE KIDS...
SAHIL-OH HELLO!!....CHALIYE..HUM SAB JAAKE VERANDA MAIN BAITHTE HAI...

WHEN THEY ARE SITTING AND SIPPING SOME COFFEE...THEY HEAR A LOUD SCREAM

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THEY ALL LOOK UP AND SEE SOMETHING HORRIBLE..A VERY WIERD LOOKING MAN..EHO'S WEARING CLOTHES WHICH ARE AS STIFF AS STEEL,AND IS LOOKING LIKE A PIRATE....AND HAS A PARROR ON TOP OF HIS SHOULDERS!!!!!!

THE PARROT SAYS-WAIT TILL THE FULL MOON..HAHAHAHAHAHA

EVERYONE IS SHOCKED AND THEN.....

WELL..I KNOW THIS WAS LONG AND PAKAU..BUT I PROMISE TO WRITE BETTER STUFF..AS I SAID IM CHANGING IT IN2 AN AWESOME MYSTERY FIC...WHICH INCLUDES THE WHOLE REMIX GANG..PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME IF U LIKE THE IDEA!!

-SALONI 😊