A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33)

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Saloni

@sal_remix

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Posted: 19 years ago

#171

PEOPLE..HERE IS THE NEXT PART..

ASHI-UV..I THINK I NEED TIME TO THINK..
UV-I UNDERSTAND ASHI..MAIN TUMHE SAMAJH SAKTA HOON
THANKS UV..MUJHE ROOM MAIN VAPAS JAANA HAI..
UV-OK BABES..CHALO..MAIN TUMHE ROOM TAK CHHODKE AATA HOON
ahsi-ok yuvi..

THEY WALK TILL ASHI'S ROOM IN TOTAL SILENCE..
FINALLY WHEN THEY REACH ASHI'S ROOM
ASHI-THANKS YUVI...FOR EVERYTHING
UV-ASHI..(he holds her hand)..I LOVE..
ASHI-UH UV...GOOD NITE

OH! LITTLE DID ASHI KNOW THAT THE NEXT NIGHT OF HER LIFE..WOULD CHANGE HER THOUGHTS..MAYBE FOREVER

RANVEER-RAGHU AAP?!?!?
TIA-HAAN..TUM YAHAAN KAISE
RAGHU-AREY TIA! YUM WOH SAB CHHODO..MAIN MAURYA JAA RAHA HOON,TUM BHI CHALO..
SHY-YAH TIA..GO!!
TIA-RANVEER,TIAK I BAAT TOH SUNO..AB TOH RAGHU BHI YAHAAN HAI..TOH HUM RAGHU AURSHY KO BHEJDETE HAI DOC KE PAAS..AT LEAST THATS WHAT TIA THINKS
RAN-HAAN TIA..AAP SAHI KEH RAHI HAI..

TIA-RAGHU..PUH-LEESE..TIA KE LIYE SHYLA KO DOC KE PAAS LEKE JAO..AUR HAAN ITNA DHYAAN RAKHNA KI DOC SHY KO PROPER 'MEDICINE' DE!!

SO SAYING..TIA AND RANNY GO THEIR WAY..AND SHY AND RAGHU GO THEIR WAY

OK HOW WAS IT..PLEEJ TEMME!!

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 19 years ago

#172

its nice but pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont take long time this time.

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#173

its rocking sal 👏
hats off 2 u 👏
nd yeah,pls dont take to much time 2 cont,i luved dat proper medicinepart nd yeah whats going 2 happen with ashi n yuvi?puhleese cont soon.

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disha

@kutie

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#174

its good saloni....
thanx for cont....

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Saloni

@sal_remix

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#175

thanks guys..i thot tht u'll were so angry that u'll wouldnt reply only..!! 😛

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vanu

@vanu

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#176

great part as usual........ 👏

continue soon plzzzz....

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Divya

@divya_92

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#177

really nice Saloni, 👏

im sooo S***y for the late reply

continue soon!

Divz 😳

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sonam1509

@sonam1509

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#178

hey i m shoooooooooooooo shorry for replying late
plzzzzzzzzzzzz forgive me saloni
this part was gr8 n do continue nsoon
luv
sonam

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Saloni

@sal_remix

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#179

by the way..im naming my fic..'TWIST IN THE TALE'..cuz im adding a big..thrilling twist to the story..im making it into a suspense flick..yeah..well..i'll cont shortly..ok..after i write the next thrilling part 😊