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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was a saturday and tia was hurridly getting ready.sonia aunty batayiye na,how do i look??mera dress theek hai?

sonia was pleased with what she saw.ashi had told her about the misunderstandung between tia and ranveer.so,tia wasnt as hard headed as she was making herself out to be huh???

yeah tia.tum perfect dikh rahi ho.hamesha ki tarah.

TING TONG

tia flew across the room to open the door.

ranveeer was standing there with everyone.

tia smiled nervously hi.

Namaste aunty.kaise hai aap?then to ranveers surprise,she bent down and touched her feet.

all of them came inside. and ranveer introduced his relatives to everyone.

all of them got into the car cause it was the opening night of yuvis second discotheque.



yuvi had decorated it brilliantly.a lot of celebrities had also come.yuvi was busily running about getting everythiong ready.everyone went inside and sat down.

ranveer got drinks and snacks for all of them.

tia was sitting opposite to him.she looked at ranveer from the corner of her eye.he was looking hot!

he had worn a white shirt with jeans.she liked his shirt tucked in like that.made him look....sexy.

STOP IT!!!! she scolded herself mentally.what does it matter to you how he looks???

well......all the models did drool over him...and she had heard shelly talking about him......she had felt like going and giving her one good tight slap.not because she was concerned about who liked him or whatever,she assured herself,but they were paid to work not pant after their boss!!!!!

she looked at the girl sitting next to her.she seemed so lost.so out of place.but she liked her.ranveer had said she was going to be in mumbai for 3 months.maybe she could take her out somewhere,go shopping or something.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
awesome pls continue so luks like tia we will get 2 see tia getting jealous 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well yeah cause ranveer already knows he loves tia.only tias being stupid 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey plz cont asap its fantastic 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast it's awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i am eager to know wht happens next
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...its relly nice...cont asap 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey it so many days not continued.olz fast,we all are waiting.and plz bring sumone in tia life to make ranny jealous.plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99

thanks for the comments.
heres the next part.its an ashi yuvi part but necessary for the tia ran story.im not that sure about writing yuvi ashi scenes so ...... bear with me ok?? 😉


the opening night was a huge success.everyone was having the time of their life.then suddenly,at the stroke of midnight the lights went out.
yuvi came up on stage.
friends,is khushi ke mauke par i would like to say a few things.first of all i would like to thank each and everyone who has been responsible for making this day possible.
but there is one speial person without whom none of this would have been possible.i want to give a special thanks to that person.
he looked at ashi,who was standing a little away from the stage a slight smile hovering about her face.
he smiled and looked away. dosto,maine apne poori life mein jo bhi kiya,woh kisi ke pasand ya na pasand ke according kiya.bahut baar mujhe aisa lagta tha ki main apne liye nahi,kisi aur ke armano ke liye ji raha hoon(remembering his dad)
bahut frustraed tha main,ek loser
aur phir main usse mila,us ladki se jisne mere poore life ko hi badal diya.har mod pe usne mera saath diya hai.she has been my strength,my support,my love........she is everything to me.
She was the person who made me ralise my worth,who gave me the confidence to fight,when I was nothing…….
yuvi looked at ashi,his voice straining,
Ashi,maine hamesha tumhi se pyar kiya hai.main yeh to nahi keh sakta ki main hamesha tumse itna hi pyar karunga...... but il try my best to see you happy always.
I know ki I have been pressuring you to get married. I want to tell you that whatever your answer will be,il always be there for you.il always love you.
Yuvi stepped down from the stage and walked to where ashi stood.
He knelt down,will you marry me…….Ashi?
Ashi stood stockstill.her heart was beating fast.she had always known yuvis proposal would be different but like this…..so sweetly….and in front of so many people….her eyes watered
The silence in the hall was deafening.
She reached down and took his hand in hers and whispered softly…..theres nothing more I would ever want in my life.
Yuvi bit his lip and stood up..and then he just hugged her…as if he would never let her go.
A huge cheer went up.
Ashi laughed out in joy.hey bhaggu!!!she was getting married…to the most wonderful person in the world.she would never forget this moment.never!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
its great vitak..plzzzzzz cont soon

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