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very nice u know i kinda miss the ashi tia scenes in remix it was so much fun wen they both use 2 fite nd tease easch other nd call each other names 😭 now remix is becum very serious

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too good
THNK U SO MUCH for makin tia stop talkin in third person 😆
continue soon 😳

and angad_cutest[natasha is it 😊] im niyu 😃

it's a really nice fic
btw, is it an au or tr one?
neway, cont asap

& angad_cutest, natasha, hey, i'm shriya

it is awesome 👏 the best part is that tia has stopped taking her own name.i hope this happens in remix also.
plzz continue as soon as possible.

ya 😆 😆 😆 i too was tired of her talking in third person so decided tohack it off 😆 😆

nice 1

plz continue soon

cant wait

PAPA!!!!!!! SONIYA AUNTY!!!!!!!! tia hugged her father. he looked very good.looked like soniya aunty had kept him in shape.she giggled.
'kaise ho papa. soniya aunty,maine apko bahut miss kiye.'
soniya:'Tia, tum to aur bhi beautiful lag rahi ho.oh my!!!!!'
ya ya mama said ashi, pushing tia towards the dining room. tia bahut achi hi now im really hungry. early morning 4 o clock utke gayi hoon iske liye and im damn hungry.
hope theres something good for breakfast!!!!!


the whole day passed in sweet remnices. everyone wanted to know evrything about her stay in paris.
finally ashi and tia were alone.
so,ab tum batao.yuvi ka kya haal hai?
uska kya haal hoga? hes fine. uski restaurants achi chal rahi hai........hes very happy.

there was silence for sometime. uh.... tia? can i ask you something??
ofcourse.shoot!!
tum ranveer se .... milne jaogi?

a tightness caught hold of tia . suddenly she was finding it difficult to breath.she turned her face away to hide her pain.

ashi.....,main ek baat kahu tum bura to nahi manogi na? ashi gazed at her mutely.
she steadied herself
. Ashi, please....please mujhse' ranveer ke bare mein kuch mat kehna.
woh mera past hai. Aur ....mein phir se uske bare mein soch kar apna time waste nahi karna chahti.ok?
she looked up to see ashi looking at her with....pity??? in her eyes.
ive gotta go.goodnight ashi.

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umm i think this part is not as good ill try better nextime ok?
and comments please 😳

Originally posted by: shriya_chadha

btw, is it an au or tr one?

both come i guess😉

hey nice fanfic
i loved reading it.

ya please continue soon
it's awesomeeeeee 😊