LIFE BEYOND MAURYA (a fic):last part,pg46 - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
keep writing
waiting 2 read da nxt part
gr8 fic
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neelakshi1985

hi...this is the first time i am replying 2 ur fan fic but i just LOVE IT!!!!its really very nice.i read it at a strech n feel its the best one i've read so far 😊
keep it up--ur a born writer 😳 😃

Hey hi neelu..... Thanx a lot yaar......😃

Especially ur last sentence.....it really touched me......😳😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

Chapter 19

" Haan…..let them come…" she said without even thinking what she was talking…..

As she saw him again…she knew she was in love with him….a feeling so powerful…..a feeling so deep….she had never experienced before….not even when she was dating him in college….maybe a kiss had indeed changed everything…..but she still cared about Sandy….what was she going to say??? And why had Yuvi come to meet her all of a sudden???

" Hi Yuvi…Hi Sandy…." She now found herself saying.

" Hi…" said Sandy….Yuvi was too busy looking at Ashi…unnoticed by Sandy…..

Ashi tried not to look at Yuvi…..

" Uh…guys…inse milo…yeh hai mere coach…Jimmy! Jimmy…say Hi to Yuvi and Sandy…." She said gesturing at both of them.

And then it happened in a flash of a second…….one second Jimmy was shaking hands with Yuvi and Sandy….Ashi was smiling….

The next second……Ashi's white T shirt had a drop of red near her shoulder….which seemed to be spreading faster and faster….so that her sleeve became red…..

Her smile remained attatched on her face…as she fainted and fell in Yuvi's arms….he was near enough to catch her……

"Ashi….." was the faint whisper that escaped his mouth…..

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Posted: 19 years ago
omg did sm1 shoot hr or smthing ?????????????????? bt awsome prt asusual......... god i luv ur fic sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much .......
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Posted: 19 years ago
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn....yeh wht....ok i don know wht to say.....but really really gud....continue asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
mads dear what happened..did sandy shoot her or something???????? please continue...havta read the next part soooooooonnnnnn 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
wat happened 2 ashi?!?!
dyin 2 knw
cont ffaaaaaaasssssssssstttt
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Posted: 19 years ago
😲
arrey mere ashi ko hua kya?
did sum1 shoot her 🤢
naahhhiiiii 😭

tum humme suspense mein nahi rak sakti mads jaldi nxt part post karo na 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh god........he bhaggu.....humari ashi ko kya ho gaya......... 😭
plzzzzzz continue soooooon.......we are dying to read further........

awesome part..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
sooo cool
waiting for the next part

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