LIFE BEYOND MAURYA (a fic):last part,pg46 - Page 24

Aww mads....u can't keep us in suspense like this! What happened to ashi??? we're all dying to know! On public demand: Please continue ASAP! 😉

wonderful part btw!

mads I will give my comments on this part only after u post the next part😉......so post it asap

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

mads I will give my comments on this part only after u post the next part😉......so post it asap

Hey ashi no blackmailing haan.....😉

Chalo thik hai...not for ur comments...par kyunki I cant keep u guys in suspense nemore....main next part post hi kar deti hoon.....😉

Chapter 20

" Ashi kya special hai is park mein…is waqt tumhe andar kyun jaana hai?? "

" Yeh socho….yeh gate cross karna kitna exciting hoga….beech raat mein…sunsaan park….spirits bhi toh ho sakte hai!! What fun man!!"she said clapping her hands in excitement, "Anyway yeh tumse nahi hoga…main tumhe dikhati hoon….Watch!!! "she said starting to climb.

" Ashi….tumse bhi nahi honewala…Ashi…forget it…. Ashi!!" He said as he tried to catch her.

Ashi pushed his hand away.

" Mujhse hoga…ok?? Aur tum yahaan dekh ke mujhe conscious mat karo……tum udhar dekho!! "

" Hello…what??? "

" Udhar dekho!! "she said gesturing with her hand.

" Par why…?? "

" Udhar dekho!!! "she almost shouted.

" Udhar dekhne se kya hoga…tumse nahi honewala…."he said turning around with his back at her.

" Look Yuvi…tum udhar dekho….aur jab tak tum mudoge na…I would've crossed the gate!! Please!! "

" Fine…par tumse nahi honewala…"

" Itna aasan nahi hai…par main kar loongi….." she said almost reaching the top " Main kar loongi Yuvi…idhar mat dekhna…."she said in a sing-song voice.

" Ok Ok….."

" Yuvi…save me Yuvi!!! "

" Ashi!! " he woke up with a start.

" Kya hua Yuvi…." asked Sandy worried. " Ashi's fine….she's in the room na….vo log uska khayaal rakhenge…don't worry…" she smiled consolingly.

" I'm fine…"said Yuvi suddenly and loudly…more to console himself than Sandy.

But he knew it was a lie…how could he be fine….?? How could he…when Ashi was in so much pain??

He didn't seem to remember the journey to the hospital…didn't seem to remember how they had reached there….all the while he could see only Ashi's face…the beautiful face…which he loved….the face which he adored…..

Who would do such a thing??? He thought time and again….but then he remembered that Ashi is a top notch tennis player…any opponent's jealous fan could have been behind this……

He rubbed his eyes….it had been 6 hrs since they had been here….Tia and Ranveer had been informed…and they must be on their way….he thought…..the last 4 hrs had been unbearable….when he knew Ashi was being operated…..he had never been so restless in his entire life…not even when he had to make his first business deal……

He had been so close to lose her…..A cold fear had gripped him….a fear which he had never before experienced….a fear which he was unknown to…..he knew his life would be over if Ashi would die…..he knew he couldn't live with her death……even though he could live without her…..and the fear led him to his feelings….it opened his heart to a new truth…..a truth which he had long before experienced….a truth which could change his life forever……

He knew he loved Ashi….and he could no longer deny it…..

But Ashi….what about her…..???? And Sandy….what was he going to tell her????

" Aap mein se Yuvi kaun hai…." the doctor asked with a confused look at Jimmy and Yuvi.

" Jee Main Yuvi hoon….kyun…koi problem hai kya…" he asked worry in his voice.

" Nahi…actually patient ko hosh aa gaya hai….aur unhone sabse pehle aap ka naam liya…"

For those who havn't realised...the scene in italics is the Ashi Yuvi park scene when they first dated each other.......😃

thank god she is safe......so probably this incident will make him realise that ashi is his true love.

anyways loved both parts as usual......but now since the next part is abt yuvi meeting ashi I want u to post it even sooner.....aur balckmail karoon kya 😉 😆

i knew tht scene frm da first lline u wrote
mads its too good
u just keep on writing

😉

omg! i luved both the parts.......they were amazin, mads u really took the breath out of me in the previous part......somethin like i had felt in the fic "the other side of luv".....too cool.....


atta lavkar dusra baag post kar!! 😉 😉 pleaseeeeee, nai tar me radnar!!! 😉 😉

arrre mads luved it .......... u rock n so ds ur fic continue soon .... 👏

thnk god ashi is fine
gr8 part 👏 👏

did someone shoot ashi.plz cont asap