LIFE BEYOND MAURYA (a fic):last part,pg46 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

342

Views

19.9k

Users

52

Likes

34

Frequent Posters

funky n crazy thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
is there a reaction 4 me??????????i don think sooooooo
mads thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: s_aangel

thank u so much nains....i am glad u read it!😃

maaaaaads, i am goin mad now cos there's some serious prob with my comp(wht a timin😡) i read frm the 15th part an seriously i am speechless this is crazy its a fic but mads i can actually visualise it soo well an some1 said abt gettin goose bumps me tooo😳

mads i am sorry i will not be able to post ma comments regularly cos of ma xams an the comp prob but then i am feelin sorry 4 myself cos i've no idea when i'll read it again....i hope its at the earliest😭😭😭

it was jus wonderful mads am sayin it again an again i am fallin in luv with this fic!!!!!!!

an yes like every1 i jus went cdrazy readin the 15th part......it was somethin i had thought tht w8ill never happen to yuvi an aashi cos of seein remix but u made it possible an lemme say tht jab tak tumhara yeh fic rahega i don really care of the 2 not goin around in the present track of remix!!!!

bye luv sonia😛

Hey soniya....first of all thanx a lot yaar....I mean...u actually told ppl abt my fic....this is sooo touching.....😳😳😳

And dont ever say sorry yaar....its ok...u hav ur exams na....so I can understand that u wont be able to place comments regularly.....

And evn if u do miss it...u can just PM me wenever u hav time...and I'll giv u the link to it......😛

Radu nakko!!😃😉

cz13 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
need to cont plz
awesum chappie 👏
vanu thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
toooooooo goooooood......... 👏
isshikha thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
its awesum... 👏 ...continue soon...plzplz
Anvesha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
Wow its very good 👏 👏 👏 ...I just don't have words.I really enjoyed reading each and every chapter.
mads thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Chapter 18

" Sandy….main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon……actually….vo…. aaj… you know….vahaan….Ashi ke ghar…...I…..I just couldn't control myself….and you know….we….um….kissed each other…."

This is what he wanted to say……

But he knew he couldn't……

" Yuvi…kya main andar aa sakti hoon……" asked Sandy in a teasing voice.

" Huh?? Haan….of course….of course tum aa sakti ho….I mean…yeh bhi koi sawaal hai sweet-heart? Come in…" he stood aside to let her come in.

She stepped in and gave him a warm hug…..Yuvi couldn't hug her back…..his mind was still full of his and Ashi's kiss…..

" Toh Ashi….kya kiya aapne aur Yuvi ne aaj….."

" Thakur….what do you mean kya kiya???? Lunch kiya aur kya….."

" Nahi Ashi…..aap humse kuch chupa rahi hai…."said Ranveer sternly.

" For once Thakur!!! Can't you leave me alone!!! Kya yeh jaroori hai ki main har baat tumhe bataoo……Just Leave Me Alone!!!! " and saying this she stormed into her room and closed the door.

" Kya baat hai Yuvi…." Asked Sandy as she moved away from him and touched his face.

" Huh….nahi kuch nahi…..vo…."

" Look Yuvi….kuch toh baat hai….and you're not telling it to me…you know wat?? Take your time honey….par is tarah se mujhse kuch mat chupao….." she touched his face and was about to leave when Yuvi caught her and hugged her tightly.

He didn't know what else to do…..but he knew he would hurt Sandy if she ever came to know about it…..he knew he couldn't confess it to her….he knew he just couldn't…….she loved him too much…..but the question was….did he still love her???

One kiss…..could it change everything that was going on between him and Sandy for 4 yrs??? And what about Ashi……Is she angry…sad….happy…..he had no idea…..

But then he smiled faintly as he seemed to remember something……

" Main bahut complicated hoon Yuvi….." she had said when they first dated each other…..

" But I've always understood you….toh phir ab kyun nahi??? " and he said the last 5 words loudly enough for Sandy to hear.

Sandy broke apart. " Ab kya nahi Yuvi….What do you want honey??? "she asked teasingly.

Yuvi smiled distractedly….but his mind was still on Ashi…..

" Anvesha!!! This is the second time…aaj kya ho raha hai??? You never lose yaar!!! Concentrate!!! "said a frustrated voice.

" Sorry Coach!! "said Ashi apologetically. " Ab nahi hoga….I promise!! "and she positioned herself to take the serve….but missed it again……

By this time…..Jimmy…her coach had come to her side and was feeling her head….

" Ashi…tum thik ho na…you never play so badly….kya hua?? "

Kya hua??? She asked herself the question…but for the first time…she knew it couldn't be answered…..Tennis always distracted her….she was able to forget all her worries…..she could forget anything and everything….but right now…she couldn't….

" No…nothing….uh Jimmy….can we pack up now?? Please…" she now asked in a pleading voice.

" Ok Ashi…never thought you would say this….hamesha toh yeh meri line hoti hai…!! "he smiled faintly…..

They packed and were about to leave…..when the guard entered the court….

" Ma'am….koi Yuvraj Dev or Sandy…aapse milna chahte hai….."

devilangel thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
heyyyyyy wow i am the first one to read your fic...its great and awesomeeeeeeeeeee............ please continue..cant wait for what will happen 😃 👏
Eloquent thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
Hey mads!!! thank bhaggu u continued yaar! I was waiting for u to continue...!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

This chapter totally was rocking!

"One kiss…..could it change everything that was going on between him and Sandy for 4 yrs??? And what about Ashi……Is she angry…sad….happy…..he had no idea….."

I really loved this particular para yaar!!!😳

great work 👏 👏 👏
ashi_mania thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago

awesome yaar......so he didnt actually say it haan 😉.....but I liked the confused yuvi that u showed in this part.....and that line like harshu said was amazing......too good 👏 👏 👏 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".