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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#61

shriya ure fic is really gud.............pls pls pls continue it asap.........the thing is tht u hve posted part 13 twice😆

Edited by funky n crazy - 19 years ago

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#62

Part14

Ashi followed Latty into her room.

Ashi: (thinking) Yeh Latty mere room mein kya kar rahi hai?

Latty: Shy, tumne us Raj se baat ki?

Shyla: Wo-oh, Latty, itni zor se mat bolo, koi sun lega. Haan, maine usse baat ki, uski wajah se hume accha topic mil gaya.

Latty: Aur mera kya, tumne mujhse ek deal ki thi.

Shyla: Wo-oh! Tum worry mat karo, agar Shyla un dono ko mila sakti hai, to alag bhi kar sakti hai.

Latty: Great! Thanks, Shy.

Shyla: Latty, tum mujhe jaanti ho na, jab Shyla rock karti hai, to sab roll karte hain.

Ashi is stunned at hearing this. She goes to find Uv to tell him about Raj.
She finds him in his room.

Ashi: Uv, maine tumhe Shyla ko follow karne ko kaha tha na, tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Uv: Wo Shyla apne room mein chali gayi thi, to mujhe laga ki tum bhi wahi hogi, isliye main bhi yahaan aa gaya.

Ashi: Fine. Ab suno, tumhaara cousin ek fraud hai, jhootha hai.

Uv: What crap! Ashi, tumhaara dimaagh kharab ho gaya hai!

Ashi: Mera dimaagh kharab hai? Tumhaara dimaagh theek nahi hai, aaj tak apne cousin ki real identity nahi pata chal paai, poora politician, usse tumhaare dad ka beta hona chahiye tha.

Uv: Ek second, tumhe kaise pata chala?

Ashi: Well, main Latty ko follow kar rahi thi, aur wo mere room mein Shyla se baat karne gayi, maine unki baatein sun li.

Uv: I don't believe u.

Ashi: Theek hai, mere pas ek plan hai, lekin mujhe tumhaari help chahiye.

Uv: Fine. Main bhi tumhe prove kar doonga ki mera cousin jhootha nahi hai.

Precap: What is Ashi's new plan, & will it succeed, or will Uv be proved right? Don't forget to post ur comments on this one.

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vanu

@vanu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#63

toooo goooog .....suspense is really building up......

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

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Posted: 19 years ago

#64

hey I read the last 3 parts together! pls continue naa! This looks dman interesting!

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#65

Part15

Ashi & Uv started working on their plan, they decided to use Shyla's cell phone.

Uv: I know, tum usse uska phone borrow kar lena, use koi shak nahi hoga.

Ashi: Haan, main jab uske saamne Raj ka no. milaoongi aur Shyla ki voice mein baat karoongi, tab bhi use koi shak nahi hoga. U psycho!

Uv: To phir madam Einstein, tum hi bataao na, hum kya karein?

Ashi: Ab humaare pas ek hi raasta hai, hum uske cell chori karenge.

Uv: What!!!???

Precap: Will Uv be able to stop Ashi from this, or will he be a victim of Ashi's 'wackomania' once again? Read it all in d next part, 'Wackomania'.

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#66

wow sgriya this is simpli awesome but hey tum itne short parts post mat karo plssssssssssssssssssss......pls make it longer na 😉

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#67

wow shriya this is simpli awesome but hey tum itne short parts post mat karo plssssssssssssssssssss......pls make it longer na 😉

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breeze_912

@breeze_912

Explorer

Posted: 19 years ago

#68

great part 👏 but it was vry short

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#69

Part16
Wackomania

Ashi: Haan, hum uska cell steal karenge.

Uv: Acha! Aur tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhaari help karoonga chori karne mein.

Ashi: Well, first of all, hum log exactly steal nahi, bas uska cell thodi der ke liye usse bina pooche borrow karenge, aur phir wapas rakh denge, aur doosri baat, tumhe kisi ne kaha bhi nahi hai chori karne ko, yeh kaam to koi aur karega.

Uv: Kaun?

Ashi: Patience, Uv, patience. Tumhe pata chal jaayega.

She goes to Uv's room to talk to Sid.

Ashi: Hi, Sid! Tum theek ho?

Sid: Ashi, ye tumhe kya ho gaya? Itne normal human being ki tarah kyon baat kar rahi ho? Anyway, Uv yahaan nahi hai. To jao.

Ashi: Kyon, main tumse milne nahi aa sakti kya?

Sid: Ab mujhe kya karma hai? Main is time bhootni to bilkul nahi banoonga.

Ashi: Uh…zyaada kuch nahi, bas thodi si chori.

Sid: What!!!???

Precap: Will Sid be ready to steal Shyla's cell, & even if he does get ready to do so, will he do it without wrecking havock? Read it in d next part, Madness Uncensored.