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Posted: 19 years ago
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uv incase u r readin this.....i wanted to say something...i normally write letters but since u r not respondin i did not knoe how else to contact u ..apart from this.....well..the poem that was read out on craze fm was NOT mine...i had written a poem but not that one....i think the poem that was read out was mads i am not very sure though...however the fact that u thot it was me just made me go ecstatic...in fact actually my mom did not let me listen to the show and i heard it much later....and i thot it was the rite thing to do--to let u knoe it wasnt me..i dont take credit for other work..i am quite sad that my poem was not read out ....but hey u said u loved me and thats enough....i am postin my poem here ,,please let me know how u liked it through email ocourse...i am sure after those thousands of mails i ve sent u ...u must be havin it...

THE FINAL COUNTDOWN

The final countdown has begun

Until finished I shall try

For I must confess I donot have courage in plenty

But I do have the will to try

100,90,80 and 70

life for me has started changing its ways

the sun seems so much mre brighter

and the flowers seem to be in their full bloom

70,60,50and 40

my frnds laugh at me

they say I am in love with just a name

they say I am merely infatuated

50,40,30 and 20

I don't care about wat they say

When I see u my face lites up with a smile

My heart skips a beat

10,9,8,and 7

I can dread the time is approachin

It seems I am losin my my voice

And my ability to think straight

7,6,5and 3

why do I feel this is meant to be??

Although destiny has made her final decision

I still wish to tell u how I feel

3,2,1 and 0…..this is my final cue

I have no questions to ask

Coz U will not give the answers I seek

And I know its now or never

So I take a deep breath to calm my nerves

And I say I love you

Yes,I love u

I feel so deeply for u

Your one smile can lite up the darkest of my days

This is not some silly crush

Coz I ve had my share of crushes

And this feelin is not like that

I love u even though I know I will never get u

Ppl say this is true love..is it?

I dread facing u incase I make a fool of myself

But now that the final countdown is over

I wish It is repeated again and again

So that I can tell u how much I love u

Over and over and over again

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that a very good poem u have written all that u wanted to say in a poetic form 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I mu say u really are a very good poet. 👏👏👏. It was really sweet. I hope Raj reads it 😳. I wish I could write a poem for Raj 😭but I am very bad in writing poems. 😭. Fate sum more poems plzzz. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow.it is superb.i'm sure he'll love it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Fate ur awsome......i really hope raj reads it .
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur gr8 fate
dis is soo gud he will surely fell for dis
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Posted: 19 years ago
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First of all Hi guys!!

And secondly...u r rite Tia...it was my poem dat was read out.....but they didnt get the name rite...neways I dont mind dat at all....imp thing is dat my feelings reached him.....😳

Oooops!! I meant not just my feelings...but the feelings all Yuvi fans.....coz it was frm all of us girls.....😉😃

But of course urs is toooooooooooo good!!!👏 Better than me.......and I really hope dat Raj reads it....he'll fall for u as shelly said.....😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur poem reli is awesome..urs tooooo mads
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im reelly sorry tia yanglee...but fer the first time eva i liked mads poem more...
still u rock!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!!tia,i really hope raj reads it he is gonna love it

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