Roses and thornes[a fan fic]part7-Pg 11. - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz......conti...dont keep us waitin....hume iitna bhi intezar mat karao... 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr88888888888888888888888 👏 plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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all i can say is kal k remix se better toh yeh hai...infact nt better its gud.....pls continue wid it...i wanna kno aage kya hoga
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: s_aangel

its a superb one.just introduce aashi in it.

ya plz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do so--it's gr88888888888 !!!!!!!!!!!👏👏i can't praise u enuf--kahani mein naya twist😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: dia5

ya plz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do so--it's gr88888888888 !!!!!!!!!!!👏👏i can't praise u enuf--kahani mein naya twist😆

yeah, it would be gr8

pls continue

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys😊,I am sorry for having kept you waiting.I am posting the 2nd part.

Part 2

Memories were flooding back. He started remembering those moments which he shared with his mother. Those moments when his mom supported him, understood him, and was there for him when he needed her most. Suddenly Yuvi felt anger rising inside him.

Kyun mom... kyun?

Kyun aapne mujse itni badi baat chupai?Jab aapko yakeen hai ki mein aapko samjhunga to aapne mujhe kud hi sabkuch kyun nahi bataya kyun nahi bataya?

Kyun aapne mujhe trust nahi kiya?

There were so many questions but no one to answer them.

Then he saw the guitar which his mom had presented him ,he became even more frustrated he wanted to destroy it. He picked it up, broked its strings with force and just threw it away .And as if this is not enough he just kicked the a wooden bench which was near him but unfortunately tripped over it.

He fell over the bench and injured his arm. With anger still boiling inside him he got up with great difficulty and sat down very tired with the pain.[poor yuvi].He leaned over a pole and closed his eyes.

That 's all.I will introduce ashi in third part which I will post today itself.Please, tell me whether you liked this part?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8888888888888888888888888 -- plzzzzzzz post d 3rd part ASAP !!!!!!!! coz i wanna kno wat ashi's gonna do..............
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow......u ppl rite such gr8 fanfics...
keep goin....i wanna know wat ashi is gonna do...

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Its rocking. Plz plz plz continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi, Here is the third part.

part-3

Next day,

A:duh..uh vrinda main keh rahi hoon na aaj mujhe class nahi karna.

v:Kyun Ashi?Aaj humara itna immportant class tum use miss nahin kar sakti?

A:Hey..Bhaggu....Maate vrinde mujhe ek baat batao tum bachpan me kisi banyan tree ya phir kisi bhi old tree ke pas akeli gayi thi kya?

V:[confused]Kyun?

A:mein isliye pooch rahi thi kyunki mujhe aisa shak ho raha hai ki bachpan me tumahare andar koi padaku bhoot to nahi guss gaya hoga jiske vajah se hi tum hamesha sirf padai ke baare mein sochthi rahati ho!

v:[smiles] ashi tum impossible ho! main to sirf isliye keh rahi thi kyunki aaj ka class vakai me important hai agar ye class important nahi hoti to main tumhe force nahi karti.

A:[sighs]I know.

V:to tum class chal rahi ho?

A:Haan baba, chalo.

There they come to know that the class has been cancelled.Ashi is very happy.She forces vrinda to come with her to the canteen.

In corridor...

Ranveer: haan banna hum sure hai ki yuvi ko baher jaane ki koi permission nahi mili hai.[Ranveer is prefect]

Sid looks worried.

Ranveer:kya hua banna?

Sid:Pata nahin Ranveer yuvi kal shaam se room vapas nahin aaya.

R:Kya?

By then Ashi and vrinda reach there.

R:Ashi aapne Yuvi ko kahi dekha hai?

A:duh uh Takur us psycho par waste karne ke liye mere pas time nahi hai?

Vrinda:Kyun Ranveer koi problem hai kya?

Ranveer tells them.

Ashi:Hey bhaggu yuvi kya Mr.India hai jo gayab ho gaya hai?Sid tumne uske mobile par call karke dekha?

Sid:Haan magar Yuvi ne apna mobile switch off kiya hai.Guys, agar yuvi bina permission ke bhi bahar gaya hota to bhi vo mujhe zaroor phone karta.

Vrinda:kahi aisa to nahi ki yuvi kisi problem mein ho aur phone nahi kar pa raha ho?

No one answers .Even Ashi gets worried.

Ranveer:Hume unhe doondna chahiye.He says to sid chaliye banna.

Ranveer and Sid leave.

Ashi: Vrinda main abhi aati hoon.

V:Yuvi ko doondne ja rahi ho.

She leaves without answering.

Hey guys I am afraid😭 that I am going a bit slow but I am really trying my best to do justice.I really hope that you like this part too.

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