Roses and thornes[a fan fic]part7-Pg 11.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Roses and Thornes

part one

A month has passed since Yuvi Ashi Tia and Ranveer entered last year of their junior college
The story begins......

Everything seemed to be very much quiet in the shed. There was not a single sound. Kamoshi jaise... katne ko daud rahi thi. He was standing there and seemed more quiet and still than the surrounding. Crumpled in his hand was a letter.
He seemed to be in shock. After reading the letter thrice also he couldn't believe it. How could he………….how could he believe that his mom has left him and was not going to return at all. He didn't believe it. He did whatever he could think of to prove this letter wrong. But his each and every attempt had failed. He read the letter once again.

Dear Yuvi,
Mein ye kat tumhe us decision ke bare me batanein ke liye likh rahi hoon jo mere life ka sabse toughest decision hai. Beta please……please mujhe samjne ki koshish karo. Kafi dino se mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise me bilkul akeli hoon, koi aisa nahin hai jo mujse pyar kare, jo meri feelings ki respect kare par ab meri life mein koi aa gaya hai. Aisa koi jo muje sirf samajhtha hi nahin balki mujse pyar bhi karta hai.

Yuvi, mein aaj ye sab kulkar tumhe isliye bata rahi hoon kyunki ab tum bade ho gaye ho aur tumne mujhe hamesha samja hai… muje yakeen hai ki tum mujheis baar bhi samjoge. Beta, kabhi ye mat sochna ki mein tumse pyar nahin karti …..Mein tumse bahut pyar karti hoon par aaj mere pas koi aur rasta nahin hai.Mujhe jaana hi hoga kyunki vo aisa chahta hai.Aur phir yahaan rahongi to tumahre papa mujhe meri marji se jeene nahin denge.Ab mein tak chuki hoon yuvi, kuch din apne liye, apni marzi se jeena chahati hoon……Isliye mein ja rahi hoon shayed itni door ki doobara lautkar na aa sakoo. Aur aaj mujhe sirf isi baat ka afsos hai ki mein tumse door ja rahi hoon. I am sorry…I am very sorry yuvi,please ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena.
Apna kayal rakna, jab possible hoga main tumhe contact karne ki koshish karoogi.
Tumhari
Mom.
Tears started pouring trough his eyes; now that the truth started sinking in him.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg this is reli gd!!!!puhlease continue!
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its an awesome fanfic.. plz continue SOON.. dont keep us waiting 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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my eyes are filled wid tears 😭 . very emotional fan fic. continue it 😆 . plsss
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gr8 puhleez continue!! 👏 👏 👏
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plssss contin... 😭 aage kya hone wala..mein abhi jaana chahthi hoon...plsss conin
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oh kahani me naya twist???? good please continue.
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gr8 goin
do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys thanks a lot 😛 . I am very nervous since this is my first fan fic.I will continue as soon as possible.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi anvesha!its a superb one.just introduce aashi in it.


happy remixing!

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