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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 6
They felt like the roads never ended.Asking the driver, he said they still had few hundred hundred kilometers left on the national highway. It was 11pm now.
Pankhuri thought of those AlZia scenes, when She would be in his arms and he would be willingly taking her in. So nice those days were! Rohits minds were still filled with the fragrance of her hair and those lips. They both had become obsessive about each other.
Suddenly Pankhuri let out a laugh. Rohit turned to see her. A smiling face of hers was killing, and when she laughed, he thought that if she could keep laughing like this for all her life, he would give his life to her.
He asked,"Pankhuri, are you okay?"
"Ya. Its just that one of your stupid jokes came to my mind."
"Which one?" He asked with a wink. He very well knew he was very good at leg pulling and that his jokes were remembered by everyone.
"That day," she began," when we were doing that sword fighting sequence with Ankit, Mandar and Shiva, there was a shot in which you had to fall down on my lap." Rohit nodded. He enjoyed being with her for those few moments thoroughly. She continued," When the camera was off and you were resting in my lap, you told me that I was the punar-janam of Razia and that if Razia in that time had tortured Mirza that much, he would have left her and ran away with his Zaroon Miya!" She let out a small giggle again. This time he too joined her.
They had always shared a very healthy friendship, but they realised it was more now. Rohit thought to himself,'She was thinking about me. She was thinking about my jokes. Does she... Maybe. Maybe not. But I kinda do. "
With a screaching break, the car stopped in the midst of the fog of the lonely dark jungles. Pankhuri asked the driver,"Kya hua Bhaiyya? Ruk kyun gaye?" Rohit came close to Pankhuri to see what had happened. She felt him, but did not react.
The driver moved up his trembling finger to point at something. The fog cleared out slowly and now it was visible to them. It was not something, it was someone. Red eyes, a dagger in hand, face covered with a black mask. It was a dacoit. A wild dacoit.
Pankhuri's face turned blue. Rohit gulped. Pankhuri asked him "Rohit, Am I dreaming? What are we going to do know?" "I dont think so you are dreaming. I don't know. Stay still as for now. " The dacoit signalled them to come out. All three hesitated. But when he pointed the dagger towards them, they came out with their hands up. Rohit was sticking to Pankhuri, trying to keep him as safe and comfortable as he could. ...

Hope its good. Comments Please!!!
Part 7 up today itself!
Edited by SenRazia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Aaaiiinnn 😒 Fir.. Chota sa update 😒
KYA... DAAKU... !![/B]
Ab ye kaha se tapak pade??
But apna hero Zindabad!!
Now he will save the heroine ... Picture ki tarah...hain..?? 😃
That joke of rohit... Hehe.. I hope sach me rohitwa ne aisa hi koi joke Mara ho.. On that part!! Hehe 😆
And this time..u should better give us a BIIIG Chapy 😡
This one was... [B]
👍🏼
Give jaldi.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
A cute OS
NICE 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
PART 7A
The dacoit's red eyes gleamed with greed and fierceness. Rohit, Pankhuri, and their driver were out in the open now, without any kind of protection, amidst a wild darkness. She was trembling in fear, and Rohit was worrying about Pankhuri. How should he save her if god forbid something happens?
The driver let out a yell and ran off. Whilst running, he shouted back,"Sorry Ji! Main yahan pe nahi reh sakta! Mujhe apni jaan pyari hain.." Rohit cursed him back,"A goddam *****". Pankhuri placed her hand on his shoulder and tried to calm him down. "Rohit, calm down. We can drive the car. But think how we should escape from here." He turned to her and cupped her face in his hands. He was losing control over his aware self now. She didnt object; she wanted this itself. He said, "Pankhuri, I will always be with you. Don't worry, nobody can even touch you in my presence." She smiled and cried, out of fear and happiness. It was a palette of emotions for her. He dacoit got irritated and threw his anger away in anger. They both looked back at him and moved away from each other. Rohit asked him in a strong tone,"Bhaiyya? Aapne hame yahan kyun rok ke rakha hain? Kya chahiye aapko?"
The dacoit laughed, which irritated both Pankhuri and Rohit. "Jitna bhi maal hain, nikal ke de, varna main teri jaan lene se nahi ghabraoonga. Tere jaisa ek banda, voh Sooraj, bach gaya. Tu nahi bachega." Pankuri immediately yelled,"Oh my God Rohit! He is the one who attacked Sooraj ji. Rohit, give him all the money. He'll leave us."
"No Pankhuri. These are just small goons. Give them a nice thrashing and they'll run off.", he said.
"Rohit, we dont have a driver. Now if he does anything to us, it'll not be good", she argued.
"He cannot do anything to you, trust me."
"It's not about me Rohit. What if something happens to you?"
He understood she too had feelings for him. He tauntingly said,"Why are you getting scared? You are Razia Sultan, right?"
Pankhuri turned red. "Rohit, this is not the time for jokes. Even you're Mirza right? Go and fight him"
Rohit smiled. "Thats what I'm about to do. Pankhuri, just get the swords from the trunk."
"You got our swords from the set! Why?", she asked.
"Man ki marziyaan, marziyon ka maan, kuch aisa ki hain Rohit ka dil, fitratan. "
Pankhuri smiled. " Bakwaas karne se baaz nahi aaenge aap."
The dacoit heard all this. He said," Abbe jaldi paisa de, varna ladki ko utha loonga. Vaise bhi badi sundar hain.." Rohit fumed up. How dare he say such dirty things about Pankhuri! He ran and caught his collar and started giving him blows on his face with his well built biceps. Pankhuri ran and got the swords from the trunk. This was going to be the best fight of her life!
After a few moments, Rohit took a small break with the dacoit hit him with a stone hard on his head. He started bleeding profusley. Pankhuri saw this and angered. "Tu mere Rohit ko marta hain! Ab dekh!" The Razia Sultan in her had emerged. Just when the dacoit was about to hit Rohit again, she kicked him in the lower back and made him fall to the ground. She held the sword over him and said," Ab uth ke dekh! Upar utha doongi!"
CONTINUED IN PART 7 B
COMMENTS!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
PART 7B
The dacoit was scared to death. Rohit stood up and dusted the dirt. She asked him,"Rohit, are you okay? "
"Ya. Dekha, Maine bola tha. Mohotarma se panga mat le."
She laughed with him. The dacoit joined his hands in mercy and ran off. Rohit and Pankhuri were now alone. She kept the sword in the trunk. He was looking at her in such a nice way; he respected her and more loved her. She stood in front of him. They stared at each other, with love in their eyes. Both had confessed their feelings for each other , though not in the most romantic way possible. He pulled her close to him and put his hands around her slim waist. "You love me don't you?" He asked. She smiled and turned pink. He tucked her hair behind her ear. He eyes closed, she was failing to overcome the sensation of love. "Yes, I do." She replied. "You?"
"I fell in love with you the moment I saw you." She placed her hands on his shoulders and her head on his chest. She said,"Thank you." He pulled her face up to match with his. They inched towards each other, slowly. None objected. No one around them watched, nor disturbed. Finally, their lips met. Both touched each others lips softly, and enjoyed. He felt he soft tenderness, and she felt the man in him. They went in, and didn't move away. This continued for some time. Finally Pankhuri withdrew. "Rohit, come back in the car. Its getting late. " She moved into the co passengers seat and he sat in the drivers seat. He placed his hand on the gear. She placed her hand on his. "I'll always be with you. " Pankhuri told him. They kissed each other again. This time it was in a more casual manner. Rohit said," Yeh Rohit aap hi ka hain."
They drove off and enjoyed each others company forever...

Thank you!! That was the end of the SS. I'll be back with another story soon! Leave your feedback please!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
😆
Hahahahaha
😃
I was laughing throughout the chapter 😆 😃
Gajabbb... Gajabbb 😃

Rohit... Saale ko aisi situation pe bhi joke yaad aa rha h 😃
And U mentioned Sooraj Sir's Accident also.
Sad.. he had suffered this.. 😒
Pankhury Sultan ... 😉 😃 ""Ab uth ke dekh...". This line was Hahahaha
Anu.. U made me mad.. by this chapter 😃 😃
Luv U... 😳 😳

WHEN IS THE NEXT PART ARRIVING????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
OOO TEERRRIII 😲 🥱

Second part pe to nazar hi nahi daale... 😕
KYA... KHATAM HO GAYA... 😲 😕 🥱
Mmm... I WANTED MORE.. 😭
Hmne to socha.. abhi to bahut kuch hoga... BUT 😲
Chalo ... koi nhi...
THE END WAS... NICE 😳 😳 So...
whenever any one describes Rohit or Mirza putting hands around her waist... ooo..
😳 😳 .
I always dream of this scene...
😳
Rohit... padho bhai ye sab and make it HAPPEN 😆
Anu Thanku for this story.. 😳 😊
AND AND... PLSSS DO COME SOON WITH ANOTHER ONE... JALDI

lots of luvv && demands... 😳 😆 😃
SHIVANGI
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: lionsroar

😆
Hahahahaha
😃
I was laughing throughout the chapter 😆 😃
Gajabbb... Gajabbb 😃

Rohit... Saale ko aisi situation pe bhi joke yaad aa rha h 😃
And U mentioned Sooraj Sir's Accident also.
Sad.. he had suffered this.. 😒
Pankhury Sultan ... 😉 😃 ""Ab uth ke dekh...". This line was Hahahaha
Anu.. U made me mad.. by this chapter 😃 😃
Luv U... 😳 😳

WHEN IS THE NEXT PART ARRIVING???lionsroar

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: lionsroar

OOO TEERRRIII 😲 🥱

Second part pe to nazar hi nahi daale... 😕
KYA... KHATAM HO GAYA... 😲 😕 🥱
Mmm... I WANTED MORE.. 😭
Hmne to socha.. abhi to bahut kuch hoga... BUT 😲
Chalo ... koi nhi...
THE END WAS... NICE 😳 😳 So...
whenever any one describes Rohit or Mirza putting hands around her waist... ooo..
😳 😳 .
I always dream of this scene...
😳
Rohit... padho bhai ye sab and make it HAPPEN 😆
Anu Thanku for this story.. 😳 😊
AND AND... PLSSS DO COME SOON WITH ANOTHER ONE... JALDI

lots of luvv && demands... 😳 😆 😃
SHIVANGI

Originally posted by: lionsroar

Love you Shivangi!! I'll surely be back with an awesome one..maybe a love triangle or something like that...need support from readers like you all ...

Edited by SenRazia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Loved it
Rohit & Pankhuri were cute
Beautiful OSOS 😃

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