FF/SS : PankHit Bane AlZia!

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: RuBaaa
Amazing...good start...different concept...just awesome...lovely SS ...plz update karo jaldi 😃

Originally posted by: RuBaaa
Thank you!! I'll update very soon!

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: overactor
Aww this is so cute
Rohit tumhen Allah ka waasta act upon these ffs😭😡
Loved it dear cont soon😳

Originally posted by: overactor
Thank you so much! Seriously if this was true kitna acchaa hota..

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lionsroar
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Yaar!! I like it..infact I luvd it !! 😆 😳
Such a good writer u are Anwesha . Some of the lines were awsm like..
As if Cupid just struck them with the same arrow. 😳
But Ur Ss... thoda pain utha heart me ise padhkar. I Wish it was real!! 😭 😳
Are koi to in dono ko batao that they need to get together!! 😛
But seriously... Great job !! 👏 👏 [I
Sometimes I feel like Stupido .. commenting on u writers!! Matlb how can I cmment on such gud writings?
Hm koi javed akhtar to h nhi...[/I] 😃
But this is my Super thanksss and appreciation to all the writers of the forum!!
CHEERS TO THEM!! 👏 👏 😆

Originally posted by: lionsroar
Thank YOU So Much!! My writing is inspired from the writers in this forum itself.. Ya it feels sad to think this is fantasy..

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: princess200
yaar anwesha ur updates r giving me moist eyes...last day on the sets and all...last evening last sun set...😭😭

its still so hard to accept that in a weeks time they are gna bid us goodbye 😭

Originally posted by: princess200
Thanks.. Even yesterday's epi made me cry when they showed Razia and Mirza's Past. Updated

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

hey anwesha...

pls edit his gf's name here...not a good thing u see...and besides they alll do read the forum...make it something else...

also nice update...but no need to edit your first post as a whole to add more chapters...u can include it separately as we do in our SS

chapter was niceee but it was too short yaar why...write longer ones na😭

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: princess200
hey anwesha...

pls edit his gf's name here...not a good thing u see...and besides they alll do read the forum...make it something else...

also nice update...but no need to edit your first post as a whole to add more chapters...u can include it separately as we do in our SS

chapter was niceee but it was too short yaar why...write longer ones na😭

Originally posted by: princess200
Thanks for the suggestion! I'll keep it in mind.

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

PART 4

The dark skies, the vast fields and the dead silence scared both Rohit And Pankhuri. They had been through these roads before, even alone, but this time they knew that they could not take a U turn, for no one was waiting for them at the deserted set.

Rohit and Pankhuri kept talking to themselves, to be heard only by their souls.

Rohit - "Pankhuri, please just say something! I want to listen to you.."

Pankhuri - " Why is Rohit so quiet? God, its killing me. I'll only talk to him."

Thus she began,"Rohit, what will you do when you go back to Mumbai?"

"I have a few projects at hand. I'll complete those first. And you?"

"I got a few offers. I'll check those out. Rohit, have you ever thought what would happen if we had something like Razia Sultan Returns?"

"Razia Sultan Returns?"

"Ya, like 21st century Razia Sultan. Think about it."

Rohit pondered over the idea. Even Pankhuri started thinking of what would become of the story. She would be some rich man's daughter, have awesome dresses and all that..

Rohit saw himself as a wealthy man in the story who lives a very lavish life. He was tired of playing the slave character now. But both of them had one thing in common in their stories - AlZia.

"Anyways, who do you think should be the Razia And Mirza then?", asked Pankhuri.

"It'll always be you and me, together", replied Rohit, looking staight into her eyes.

She looked into his eyes and got the answer to the question which had troubled her mind. ''Yes Pankhuri, you do love him!" She said to herself.

Trying to hide her blushes, she told him, facing the window, "Hmmm.. our fans will love it you know.."

"Ya." Even I'll love it, he thought.

They then kept silent for a few moments again. The driver was almost about to close his eyes out of tiredness when he saw a car rashing towards them. His eyes suddenly opened up and he took a swift left turn, avoiding the vehicle. This caused the car to jerk heavily and made Pankhuri, who was sitting to the right, land right in Rohit's arms. Rohit, startled, caught hold of her, just like Mirza would catch Razia. A terrified Pankhuri didn't open her eyes for a second or two and lay in his arms. She felt so protected, as if an angel was protecting her. His warmth welcomed her and didnt leave her even for a moment.

Rohit felt like he was holding a very delicate, prized possession of his in his arms. She was shaking and had caught hold of his T-shirt from behind. His chin was right on her head, and he could smell the fragrance of her hair. Coming out of this trance, he yelled at the already petrified driver -"Dekh Kar Chalao Bhaiyya! Agar inhe kuch ho jata to?!"

It was at this moment she realized she had been in his arms for so long. She quickly withdrew, and looked down. Rohit looked away. Both were wanting the moment to last a bit longer, but time doesn't care for anyone, not even two souls united.

The driver said sorry and resumed driving again.

Rohit asked her,"Are you okay Pankhuri?"

"Yes, Thank you. Are you okay Rohit?"

"Ya. "

Their journey continued further. They wantedsuch things to happen again, just for the sake of being with each other! Little did they know, a lot more was on their way...

Hope you liked it! Please leave your suggestions.

Note_ Its Fictional. Not to be taken so seriously!

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SHIVANGI

@Shivangi28

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

YA EVEN I'LL LOVE IT TOO...
this is moving in my head continuously !!

Superb...Superb... 👏
👍🏼
JALDI JALDI LIKHO...
PLSSS
CANNOT WAIT TO KNOW...AAGE KYA HUA !!

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

PART 5

They wishes the roads to never end. Because of the missed accident, Pankhuri was now sitting much closer to Rohit. It was about 9 pm now. She felt sleepy, and her tiredness took over her. Her eyelids forced her to shut themselves and she douzed off. Unknowingly her head fell on his shoulder. She got his shoulders support.

Rohit looked at her on his shoulder. Her light brown hair was coming over his hands and chest, but he did not complain. He even tried not to move, so as not to disturb her in her slumber. Her eyes were shut, but her face was bright enough to be visible in the darkness. That face brightened up his whole mood, always. He tucked her flicks behind her ear, touching her soft milky skin.

Suddenly, there was a loud honk of a truck in front of them and the driver, trying to avoid the white headlights rammed into a tree and banged the car. All of them jumped upwards, banging their heads on the car roof. They were badly hurt and were left to travel without the car's headlights. She slowly opened her eyes just to look around when she saw the driver lying in a pool of blood with the steering rammed in his head. She turned to look at Rohit, from whose head blood flowed like a water stream...

Her was panting heavily when she woke up. It had just been a nightmare, a very bad one. Rohit, shocked by the sudden movement, cupped her face in his hands and asked her, "My God Pankhuri! Are you okay?" She felt comforted by his hands. " Ya Im fine. I guess just a bad nightmare. Are you okay Rohit." He seemed a bit surprised and answered,"Why, yes. Why do you ask so?" I've been dreaming about you Rohit, she answered in her head. "No, like I saw a very bad dream. It was like.." Rohit pressed his index finger against her lips, telling her to keep quiet. "You should never talk about your nightmares Pankhuri." He said in a very calm and manly voice. She felt his finger on her lips to be a sudden electric shock go down her spine. His finger was so trembly now, trying not to hurt her soft lips. He withdrew his hand. The driver witnessed the incident, but didnt comment. He had seen a few things like this with other people before.

She looked down and glanced everywhere, trying to avoid eye contact. She then said," Im very sorry Rohit I fell asleep on your shoulder. I mean.." "No problem at all Pankhuri. I..umm... didnt feel bad." Both looked to the opposite sides and smiled.

I know its short.. sorry!!

Tomorrow's Friday and Im gonna be back with a bang!

Next Up: Hero Rohit, Fighter Pankhuri

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