Alzia SS - The Prisoner Queen. CHAPTER 4 on page 7

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

😃 😃 😃
🤗 🥳 Thankuuu!!!
After reading it for the third time ...I finally thought to comment ! hehe
The best thing about this update was...that it started with one of my most favourite dialogue of Altunia...
" Ama aap ladkiyan matlab bada poochti hain !!" 😃 😆 😃
Ohhh my Mirza!! and Oh my Arshia ... Thanku for writing these lines!
That part when Razia is confused between his guts and smirk.. 😃 😆
His smirk rules...always!!
My most favourite ... favourite lines "Altunia tightened his grip on her hands making her wince.
He brought his lips close to her and spoke in his huskiest tone "Humein apni baat manwane ke bohot tareeke aate hai Mohtarma aur yeh dil toh aapko dekhte hii ghulam bann jaata hai gustakhiyon ka"
He is so so so goood!!! Amazinggg 😳
Their cute cute nok jhonks...his bossy orders.." Nikaah toh aapka hum se hi hoga " 😆
Sorry agar line galat ho gyi ho.. jo yaad tha wo likh diya 😛
My Alt-oon part!!... cute as always 😆
I loved his line " Tum sirf apne baare me hi sochna namuraad, kabhi hamara bhi khayal kar liya karo !" 😆
Atigin ka sach samne aya... bloody dhokebaaz!! This news ruined my Altu's mood 😡
Waiting for their nikaah announcement and razia's ikraar 😃
Loved this update to the core ❤️
And while writing this..I got the notification that next chapter is also updated so I'll read it after posting this 😃
Love love love
Rabbit 😆

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Will comment on this... only if u give the next update today only... plsss 😈
😃 😆 plsss haan!!

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: lionsroar
Will comment on this... only if u give the next update today only... plsss 😈
😃 😆 plsss haan!!

bilkul nahi😡...comment kar jaldi😆

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: princess200

bilkul nahi😡...comment kar jaldi😆

I'll do anything for the next update 😆

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Loved it dear
Awesome update
Raziya ne galat time pe gussa bhadka diya
But this was the worst he could tolerate
Raziya had really gone crazy 😆
Banadiyoon se uski baate was nicely penned
Baap re isse kehte hai aa bail mujhe maar
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Urghhh... I hate Atigin 😡 Dosti ke naam pe kalank 😡
Why Altunia was so blind in dosti and pyaar

Subedar Sahab yeh, Subedar Sahab woh." Haha .. She was missing him 😆 Her cute anger 😳

Aur yeh hii nahi, kitni baar toh woh khud aap par nazar rakhtey thay, subah aapke uthne se pehle, jab aap baagh mein tehelti thi, khelti thi, jab aap soti thi raat ko, jab aap hamam mein..." 😆 😈 😆
Mmhmmm.. Wowww!! He never left her for a second yo. Only if the baandhis elaborated these lines 😆 😳
Razia made a long hawh!' shape with her lips along with wide eyes. "Hamam mein ?? Unhe toh hum...Aur tumhe yeh sab kaise pata ? Tumne dekha unko ?" she couldn't help but ask, the note of jealousy evident in her tone.

Razo... Even after hearing this ..she was more concerned about the fact that the baandhis saw him 😆 😆 that cute jalan 😆

"Sabko unki deewangi ke charche sunayi de rahe hai ek hum hii hai jo kuch nahi jaante." Razia said quite irritated.
Awww... Razia ... She's missing him hard ! 😳
I luv these lines.

"Begum Sahiba, aap unke ishq mein malang ho chuki hai, aap maane ya nahi maane" And ran off making Razia fume even more. 😆 I luv Mirza's baandhis.. 😆 They just did a perfect job! 😆
I'm glad Fatima came. Her presence was much needed. 😃

Even fatima knows him better than Razia...
when...this akdoo shehzadi will understand his pure , strong, passionate love for her. She knows ... just , she's not showing right now! Bevakoof!! 😕

And the cheery on the top... her taunts!! Godd 😕 😆 She raised the Angry young man inside him.
The lines depicting the anger in his eyes
Ab koun bachayega Razia ko 😆

He's defo not going to spare her easily 😈

Pleaseee... next chapter de do... please 🤗
Warna u know... I'll go mad 😆
Please... ❤️

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

started writing...thoda waqt de coz im so out of ideas nw abt their romance...have to try different sorts of stuff

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Paridhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Will read the story from starting and then I will comment...

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: princess200
started writing...thoda waqt de coz im so out of ideas nw abt their romance...have to try different sorts of stuff

Take your time.. Coz I want a pure Arshia type wala update..
The magic u did in " Death is not the end".. I want the same one here. 😃 😳
But pls... Give a longgg update this time... I mean really long !! 😃