Alzia SS - The Prisoner Queen. CHAPTER 4 on page 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
😊
Edited by AlZian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome chap 👏 thank u for pm 😳
The way u wrote each and every word ..
Brilliant 👏
I was totally shocked reading tht raz doing
Suicide 😳 . i could feel altu's love & fear
And raz's pain & anger.. And when read she
Fell from there i was like 😭 . after reading
It was just a nightmare i was like thank god 😵
After tht danger nightmare it was obvious
Tht he going there and checking is she ok or she
Is there or not. He is too caring.. His small small
Gestures show his love towards her TRUE LOVE ❤️
. arre raz galat time pe uth gayi
Firse itna kuch bol diya
🥺
But i can understand her
Par chalo ek accha hua "nikah" ki baat toh nikli 😉
Precap - excited to know kya shocks milne wale
Hai 😲
Ohh no next chp in after may but koi nay we'll
Wait 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Love u Vruuu for these amazing comments...ill try n start writing the next chapter asap...what i meant was faster updates will come after May...abhi jitna bann payega deti rahungi 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
It was amazzzing yrr.👏 His love and his affection for her. Just amazing i dont have words. The nightmare was really scary for mirza and for mirza also. And her reaction on that she will have to live with him in his room. When r u going to give hotter updates...😉
Thanks for the update. Chalo itne dino baad hi sahi par update toh aaaya.
And thanks for the pm.
Update sooon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
😊 😊
Aaahaaa... Bahot dino ke baaad !!!!
Finally kuch toh aage badha... 😊

Hamesha ki tarah... Aapki writing... Words... Their perfect use... is my favourite...
Hamara pasandeeda was the bedroom part... 😊
Altunia is as always.. Maaru !!

Par bohot intezar karna padega...
But ... Shukr hai we got something... Time pass ke liye.
Baki toh you know... Hume kya kehna hota hai... 😊
Precap was... 😃 😃
🤗 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: princess200

Love u Vruuu for these amazing comments...ill try n start writing the next chapter asap...what i meant was faster updates will come after May...abhi jitna bann payega deti rahungi🤗


Ohh i thought you'll give update after may..
Love u too ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Loved it dear
Awesome update
Hmmm so finally Raziya in trap of Atulniya
He really loves Raziya
Last scene in room was good
Ab Raziya kya karegi
Thanks for the PM
Continue Soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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starting was Gajab Arshi..!
I was hell scared as to where is all this going towards...
I thought may be she ran away from the fort... and at her jump, I had to take a short break to continue... it was scary
and the way Mirza was pleading to her to stop.. it was heart wrenching...😭
kyun wo door bhagti hai Mirza se, Jab wo khud bhi uske bina zinda ho kar bhi zinda nahi reh sakti...
She had not only become his love but also a dangerous obsession now
how much I love these two words when framed into a story..!
awesome waala update tha...
Purane waale update bhi dobara padhe since story thodi se bhool gayi thi but padhne ke baad laga it is all worth a read once more time ..!!!😃

P.S. Na-Mehram matlab.!?
Edited by ..radiance... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazing story ...
Loved it. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guysss !!!
Vru, Rabbit...my loves thank u for ur lovely comments

radiance, gold, swarna, shinegirl...all of u...thank u for the appreciation guys...

will try an update soon caught up with some work...but not to worry i will continue it jab tak hai jaan jab tak hai jaan ...

once again thanks a lot everyone...

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