DESIREgfh - Page 2

Thank u for making dad and son meet atleast for now...

Originally posted by: arshia200

Thank u for making dad and son meet atleast for now...

i knew mirza will be attracted to him in some way or the other aakhir khoon ka rishta jo hai...woh bhi sabse gehra wala...

bas ab hassan ki mummy se bhi milwa do mirza ko na😆

and hes having a thing for sports car jus like his daddy...aww thts so cute...2nd trait of like father like son till now😉

pls update soon...i love ur creative ideas yaar really🤗🤗

MY HEART IS THUMPING !!!! never felt this excitement since ages...
PLEASE UPDATE CHAPTER 7 FAST !
I BEG U
😭

p.s - will give complete comments on the chapter later when i have calmed down...right now i am in no fit state to sit n write a detailed comment...I AM CRAVING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
PLS DEDO !😭

Originally posted by: arshia200

MY HEART IS THUMPING !!!! never felt this excitement since ages...
PLEASE UPDATE CHAPTER 7 FAST !
I BEG U
😭

p.s - will give complete comments on the chapter later when i have calmed down...right now i am in no fit state to sit n write a detailed comment...I AM CRAVING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
PLS DEDO !😭

NO NO NO POOORA UPDATE DEDO

and pls dont tellme razia took rico and ran away overnight from kolkatta coz obviously neighbours told her who had dropped Rico home

I knw she cant take a flight...but she can board a train na

PLEASE AISA MAT KARNA...I HAVE A FEELING THIS IS GONNA HAPPEN
BUT NEVERTHELESS LET IT HAPPEN IF THATS UR DECISION coz then ill be more super excited to see how he manages to track her again

I am more eager to knw what happened btwn them tht night...the past in Shimla

PLEASE GIVE ME THE WHOLE UPDATE I AM DYING HERE😭 MY OFFICE PPL THINK IVE GONE MAD ABT SOMETHING HERE

Originally posted by: arshia200

NO NO NO POOORA UPDATE DEDO

and pls dont tellme razia took rico and ran away overnight from kolkatta coz obviously neighbours told her who had dropped Rico home

I knw she cant take a flight...but she can board a train na

PLEASE AISA MAT KARNA...I HAVE A FEELING THIS IS GONNA HAPPEN
BUT NEVERTHELESS LET IT HAPPEN IF THATS UR DECISION coz then ill be more super excited to see how he manages to track her again

I am more eager to knw what happened btwn them tht night...the past in Shimla

PLEASE GIVE ME THE WHOLE UPDATE I AM DYING HERE😭 MY OFFICE PPL THINK IVE GONE MAD ABT SOMETHING HERE

Originally posted by: cuteshravani

who r u??? really who are u??? i'am amazed how u allways manage to know my idea even before posting the chapter...😲...really amzaing imagination skills that's what u have.

I think i love u wayyy too much thats why i come to knw what is ur next update gna be like🤣
no seriously...i love u to bits and bits meri jaan🤗
but for the honest answer ...how i came to know ? well isnt it sort of obvious ??😆😉😛😃
waiting for the full update

Originally posted by: arshia200

I think i love u wayyy too much thats why i come to knw what is ur next update gna be like🤣
no seriously...i love u to bits and bits meri jaan🤗
but for the honest answer ...how i came to know ? well isnt it sort of obvious ??😃
waiting for the full update

Ah...satisfaction knows no bounds...just no bounds

CHAPTER 6

i was overjoyed with his happy session with Rico. Bhale hii dono iss baat se anjaan ho that they are dad and son...the bonding between them was perfect...just like every father and baby son's relationship should be...Rico sleeping in his arms on his lap...so cute...so refreshing...he took care of him...WORRIED for him...❤️
it was just beyond perfect...cant even put these properly in words.
and finally the joy of finding razia

CHAPTER 7

He tried to rape her ?? seriously ??!! you left it unfinished...please finish what actually happened then.
But u knw what...even though it was a rape ..almost rape...u explained his desires in such a way that i am somehow not angry with him for doing this to her🤣

Aap kaun ho yaar ??? SACHI MEIN KAUN HO ??
HOW DO U MANAGE TO DELIVER A PERSONS , A CHARACTER IN THE STORY'S FEELINGS SOOO PERFECTLY...when he was in the shower...his thoughts all night...then his thoughts on her in his flash back...the step by step feelings procedure...JUST HOW YAAR...
I salute u again...I DOUBLE SALUTE U...🤗
even if its just abdul...his thoughts and his feelings at that point the way u portray it and deliver it to ur readers its sooo out of this world !
ohh yeah and i know whats troubling abdul...yehi na kii rico is mirza son🤣

Also from what all u wrote here abt mirzas desires...one thing is clear to me...he just DESIRES her...true, no one can take her place in extinguishing his desires...but its still just a desire with a hint of feeling for her...please iss bande ke desires ko razia ke liye pyaar and care mein badal do...i think he already loves her...hes just not realized it...i am eager to see how will u write abt making him realize it...

lastly... YOU WERE BORN TO BE A WRITER ! YOU ARE A WRITER ! AND A VERY SPECTACULAR ONE THAT TOO !!

HUGGGSSS HUGSSS HUGSSS🤗🤗

IS IT TOO MUCH IF IM ASKING FOR CHAPTER 8 TODAY ITSELF ? 😳

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