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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept
Continue soon
Sry for not reading the other ff
Actually I didn't read the initial part and now the story is moved quite forward
Will read it after exams
Looking forward at this one
Thanks for PM
Keep writing
-Manu-

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
res 😊
unres ... Amazingly different concept Shravani... I love it and am eager to read more👍🏼
Sorry me too have been pretty busy with work and meetings and thus could not read ur other ff midnight summer dream just yet ...
will do it soon 🥳this one I am repeating was full of suspense to arise much curiosity!
I hope its not mirza who raped Razia... Though I have a feeling it is him

And yes... After reading ur 21st cent. FFs ... U have inspired as well as forced me to write a 21st century Alzia FF myself...

So u have something there girl!!! All the best for ur works

Cont soon!!!

Much Love
Shopau
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres//

Razia has been raped and Mirza has become a womanizer ???
😭😭
is it razia only who mirza is craving for ??
aakhir ho kya raha hai...im confused...who raped razia
?
and whos this shaheen ?? girlfriend hai kya mirza kii.
over all this is the first story i am reading whos curiousity is killing me no end...jaldi bata na yaar
jaldi update kar
loved it totally so far !🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oooh oooh oooh nw its making sense to me little...i re read it again
the lion had fallen for his prey...wasnt his prey razia ??😛
one night stand ...maybe she had some majboori...and he fell for her...
now the curiousity is killing me all the more

and whos shaheeen again i am asking...im already annoyed with her coz bada haq jata rahi thi mirza pe...saali😡

AND NO UR CHAPTER WAS NOT LONG...IT WAS SHORT INFACT...I WAS LIKE KYUNNN ITNI JALDI KHATAM HO GAYA 😭
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Nice concept

Continue soon
Sry for not reading the other ff
Actually I didn't read the initial part and now the story is moved quite forward
Will read it after exams
Looking forward at this one
Thanks for PM
Keep writing
-Manu-


THANK U SO MUCH ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

oooh oooh oooh nw its making sense to me little...i re read it again
the lion had fallen for his prey...wasnt his prey razia ??😛
one night stand ...maybe she had some majboori...and he fell for her...
now the curiousity is killing me all the more

and whos shaheeen again i am asking...im already annoyed with her coz bada haq jata rahi thi mirza pe...saali😡

AND NO UR CHAPTER WAS NOT LONG...IT WAS SHORT INFACT...I WAS LIKE KYUNNN ITNI JALDI KHATAM HO GAYA 😭
UPDATE SOON


JUST GO WITH THE FLOW DEAR BUT NO RAZIA WAS NOT ONE NIGHT STAND NITHER SHE WAS IN SOME MAJBOORI NOW U KEEP THINKING...😛 SHAHEEN IS HIS GF. ONE SIDED LOVWE U KNOW
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Posted: 9 years ago
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imperial house of BANDRA huh

Btw i stay in BANDRA Mumbai too😉😉
walking distance from the Bandra-Worli sea link😊
glad u featured my home here...🤗


abt the chapter ...res...reading it again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

imperial house of BANDRA huh

Btw i stay in BANDRA Mumbai too😉😉
walking distance from the Bandra-Worli sea link😊
glad u featured my home here...🤗


abt the chapter ...res...reading it again


WOW! U REALY LIVE THERE??? i've ust once visted the place and i love it and so i wrote about it.
and here i am stuck between the kavariyas in varanasi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yeah love i do live over there...its nanis house actually and whenever i come to Mumbai once or twice a year for holidays, i stay over there only.

oooh so his waris is HASSAN
Now its all clear to me... but i still want to know what happened exactly btwn him and razia yaar.

Yahan pe bhi malik khan aur nadard hehe...whats a story without villains ...you r awesome👏

I salute ur mind again for coming up with love stories that i love reading or seeing on tv...its amazing just way to amazing

im in a state of awe...I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE

im DYING to knw what happened btwn the two of them four years ago how did she end up on his bed and u said it wasnt a one night stand or majboori and yet she was his prey...TOH PHIR AAKHIR HUA KYA THA...??

plsss break the suspense soon...

hugsss hugsss and more hugsss🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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like father like son...obsessed with winning...cant take a defeat
i guess mirza will be impressed with hassan and ask wheres ur mommy beta ?? and then the rest will be history

I WANT THE 5TH CHAPTER NOWWW NOWWW NOWWW NOWWW😭😭😭😭

Also please clear in the next chapter tht aakhir in dono ke beech hua kya tha

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