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Originally posted by: arshia200

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Tum chapter 10 do jaldi

and mirza razia ka past complete karo

Originally posted by: arshia200

Today I will type abt abdul first

That man so loyal and so worried for his friend Mirza. It touched me. We all need a ONE friend like him. With whom we can share anything. Just any thing. No matter how wrong or shameless it is. And he stands by u like ur backbone...I love tht man...I love how he can do just ANYTHING for mirza at any time of the day or night. I love how he became happy knowing Mirza has a son. I love ur character Abdul a lot Shravni...and I love u for giving him to us in this story.

I am so happy Mirza embraced the fact tht Rico is his son. He let the tears fall. Hes going to give him all that he missed in his 3 years of life. THE FUTURE OF IMPERIAL. THE HEIR OF IMPERIAL. ...THE HEIR OF MIRZA and His Family. Eee so much of happiness...and kismat bhi kamaal hai...just one night before his accident he was with razia...just one night...maybe it was gods way of making sure tht through Rico, Mirza will get Razia and only Razia in his life. Now that he can't be a dad...he could never fill the emptiness of his life by marrying someone (tht kameeni shaheen) and its like god making sure tht only Rico and Razia are allowed to be on Mirzas cards not anyone else. True he desired her from that day endlessly, but I feel this accident was a way of barring him from having anyone else even for the time being in his life.

But all he can suddenly think of is RICO Rico...why not Razia now ? Hope by seeing her he gets his sudden rush of feeling back for her. And yes even Abdul termed his desire as love. Love which Mirza doesnt understand and love which he hasnt realized.

ALSO PLEASE PUT UR FINAL INSTALLMENT OF THEIR PAST. I want to knw how he got hold of her tht night. Since u said it wasnt her majboori or one night stand. ...though im still having a feel tht he made her majboor...but still...u are a brilliant writer im sure theres something uve hidden abt that...Im dying to read it...pls break the suspense of tht night.

Loveddd the update...love this story to the core...this is by far my favorite story of yours. I read it from the starting almost everyday. 🤗

Originally posted by: taylorswift789

hi...im new to indiaforums nd i simply love ur posts sharvani ...dats wy i decided 2 talk 2 u myself...simply ur amazing!!!!!👏👏👏...the way u portay ur characters is just awwwsmm😳...bigg wala hug 2 u dr..

wese im a girl in class 12 nd pcm...but i 2 have a creative side in me nd was yearning 2 meet someone like me...hope we meet soon in our lives...

Originally posted by: arshia200

LOL bcos of the eagerness is Adgahs voice...
i think Mirza only got rico kidnapped
so that razia comes to him🤣
JALDIII UPDATE KARO
I CANT WAIT !! im dying here