AlZia SS 'Andekhi mohobbat' Part 5 pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Haye sonu jaan.. kya update hain..👏
Ye mahotarma aur shehzadi ka confusion bara kamal hain..😆. an di loved it thoroughly... budhu mirza... aur Razia..🤣... first time i am seeing some one geting jealous of her own...😆... shehzadi nee mirza ki confusion itna bara diya ki bechare kaa sar ghoom raha hoga sayad...🤪..last scene was the best... mirza chali mohtarma ke pass...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Razia ...🤣
bechare mirza ki ab toh khair nahi😆 mirza ne toh ab uss budhe ka katl hi kar dena hai😆
sonu u r amazing ...!
i m still laughing imagining the condition of mirza right now... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Wonderful update Sonu!👏 ⭐️
Yeh AlZia bhi nah ...mohhabat ka izhaar bhi kar liye aur ek had tak Razo ne qabul bhi kar liye par Mirza ko samajh nahin aa raha hai ke woh apni liye sautan kyun chahti hai.🤣
These two can never make things simple eh. Dono ziddi jo hai. Aur Mirza ka dil aur dimag abhi confusion mein hi hai.😛
Ab bas Mirza Buddhe ko ja ke maar le...kam se kam aapki ss mein toh buddhe ko maarna chahiye.😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ifians

Haye sonu jaan.. kya update hain..👏
Ye mahotarma aur shehzadi ka confusion bara kamal hain..😆. an di loved it thoroughly... budhu mirza... aur Razia..🤣... first time i am seeing some one geting jealous of her own...😆... shehzadi nee mirza ki confusion itna bara diya ki bechare kaa sar ghoom raha hoga sayad...🤪..last scene was the best... mirza chali mohtarma ke pass...😆

😳 thnkx riu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Razia ...🤣

bechare mirza ki ab toh khair nahi😆 mirza ne toh ab uss budhe ka katl hi kar dena hai😆
sonu u r amazing ...!
i m still laughing imagining the condition of mirza right now... 😆

thnx 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
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Altunia ran towards his horse, Razia stopped him

Razia; kya hua aap itni jaldi me kahan ja rhe hen?

Altunia; (panting) shehzadi jaldi chaliye...wo ...wo ..hamari mohtarma...us budhe ne...hamari mohtarma

He had tears in his eyes

Razia; mohtarma? to wo aurten aapki us mohtarma ki baat kr rhi theen, chaliye acha hi hua, aap to wese bhi unse mohobbat nhi krte the na, ab wo ghazni ki malika ban gai acha hi hua

Altunia; nahiii, hum us budhe ko maar dalenge

Razia; ab kya faida mirza ab bewa krenge kya apni dost ko aap

Altunia looked at her in anger, tears fell from his eyes and he broke down on the floor, covering his face he started crying like a child, Razia sat down and tried to console him

ALtunia; aap sahi keh rhi theen shehzaadi, hum...hum apni mohtarma se boht mohobbat krte hen, pr...hamari ankhen ab khuli jb unhe hum ne kho diya he, ek ko bachane k chaqqar me dusri...mohtarmaaa

Razia; pr mirza agr aap unhe bachayenge to humara kya hoga

Altunia hugged her.

Altunia; museebat to ye he k hum aap se bhi bht mohobbat krte hen, ye kesa dil he hamara jo do tuqdon me bat gya he, humne to suna tha mohobbat ek baar hti he kisi ek se hti he pr ek waqt pe do log..aur dono k peeche wo budha yaldoz, usne humse hamari mohtarma ko cheen liya, hum uska qatal kiye bagair reh nhi payenge

Razia cupped his face in her hers.

Razia; mirza..mirza humari baat suno, hamari ankhon me dekho, tumhen kon dikhai deta he, mohtarma ya shehzaadi

he looked up and was shocked, they were lost in each other's eyes, and then she slowly removed her veil.

Altunia couldn't believe his eyes, his mohtarma and shehzadi were not separate but one single person, that's why he loved both, his heart recognized her but he didn't.

Altunia; mohtarma?

Razia nodded

Altunia; shehzadi?

Razia nodded again, he hugged her again and looked up to thank God.

Altunia; hamen btaya kyun nhi aapne, kyun hamare saath ye luka chuppi ka khel khelti rhi ghazni se yahan tak?

Razia; hum chahte the ke aap humse mohobbat kren, hamari asli pehchaan se jise aap mohtarma kehte hen, shehzadi se mohobbat krte to hamen acha nhi lagta

Altunia; kitni pagal hen na aap, shehzadi ho ya mohtarma humne to mohobbat ki he in ankhon se, jin me haya he nasakat he tehzeeb he aur na bujhne wali aag he, phir wo mohtarma ho ya shehzadi kya farq padta he

Razia held her ears

Razia; acha to maaf krdijiye

Altunia; itni asaani se maaf krden? (he said in a flirty voice)

Razia blushed she pulled him close by holding his shirt, and then held her face close, their lips were inches away from each other, he closed his eyes, she kissed his cheek instead and ran away. He opened his eyes and smiled, she showed him her thumb and laughed. He ran behind her.

Razia; aap hamen nhi pakad payenge

Altunia; pakad lenge, hum abhi boht jawan he us budhe ki tarah laathi pe nhi a rhe pakadne

he caught her arm and pulled her close.

Altunia; agai na hamari qaid me phirse

Razia; haan

Altunia; is qaid se niqal nhi payengi aap

Razia; niqalna kisko he

he held her tight and kissed her forehead.

Razia; yahin niqah padhne ka irada he kya janab?

Altunia; irada bura nhi he

Razia; pr humen apne ghar walon k saamne niqah krna he

ALtunia; wo to us budhe k himaiti hain na

Razia; abu hamara saath zarur denge, chalen?

Altunia; nahi diya to hum wahan se bhi uda k le ayenge aapko

she smiled and they set off for Delhi

_____The END_____
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
An amazing end to an amazing story.👏
So,finally Mirza realises that he can't manage without both Mohatarma and Shehzaadi😳
Loved Mirza's realization and their playful romance.
Its perfect!!👏 Mirza got his Shehzaadi as well as his Mohatarma and tharki buddha got thenga😆
The Quote Of This Update Is-'kitni pagal hen na aap, shehzadi ho ya mohtarma humne to mohobbat ki he in ankhon se, jin me haya he nasakat he tehzeeb he aur na bujhne wali aag he, phir wo mohtarma ho ya shehzadi kya farq padta he'👏👏👏

Bas ab sirf ek shiqayat hai,yeh buddha mara kyun nahin??

But forget it,this was really an amazing SS.

But am I forgetting something??? Let me guess.Oh,yes!!
AFSAW,AFSAW,and AFSAW forever👏👏👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
wow what an ending sonu jaan..👏
Mirza is torn btwn mahotarm nd shehzadi. without knowing that both r same...😆.. poor guy... razia ne confuse kar diya ussey... but chalo finally all confusion is over.. mirza koo pata chal gaya ki mahotarma hi shehzadi hain and vice verse..😆.. i so loved the moment when the truth was reveled i can clearly imagine mirza's shocked face...
love there cute knok jhok at the end... ur ss is alwys treat to read and leave its mark very well in readers mind... i will miss this ss...but waiting for ur new one...😳
claps for such an wonderful story sonu jaan//👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Finally d confusn is over n mirza got his 2 in 1 package at d end... !
D best part was
"Altunia; is qaid se niqal nhi payengi aap
Razia; niqalna kisko he"
Mirza ne kaha razia ko tha but main yahan scene imagine kar k hi blush kar rhi thi...!!
U were amazing sonu.
I loved the SS soo much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Happy Endings!😃 Perfect end to a super duper SS.👍🏼 👏Loved it Sonu. Everything from Mirza's emotional breakdown, admitting he loves his mohtarma, to his realisation that shehzaadi and mohtarma are one and the same. And most of all the cute flirty banter AlZia had at the end.😳 Hayee, how much I am waiting for AlZia's forehead kiss and second hug.☺️ This story was a real treat for its readers. Thanks for updating regularly and starting a new one so we won't miss your writing. 🤗

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