AlZia SS 'Andekhi mohobbat' Part 5 pg 6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ifians
Loved MIrza's confusion between mahotarma and shehzadi...😆...
Aww razo blushing listening to her own tariif😛... mirza gets shocked seeing sehzadi's fighting skills😆
loving the story further.,. gr8 work and cont asap👏

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

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It was getting dark so Altunia decided to stop somehwere and conincidently they arrived at the same motel they had stayed earlier, the receptionist smiled.

Receptionist; kamal he miyan, tum wapas bhi agaye aur is dafa doosri khatoon k saath?

Altunia made a face, Razia smiled.

Altunia; ama andhe ho kya tum, khatoon wahi he bas ab libaas badal gya he, wo kya he na, hum dono ne niqaah krliya to ab nayi naveli dulhan shauhar se pehle kisi ko apna chehra kese dikhayegi

Razia rolled her eyes, "khud ko dikhai nhi deta aur dusron ka mazaq bna rhe hen" she thought

Receptionist; ab miyan tum niqaah kr k aaye hot to tumhen acha kamra to dena hi hoga

They were provided with a good room but with a single bed

Altunia; humne jhoot keh diya, hum yahan zameen pe sojayenge aap palang pe aaram farmaiye, aap ka parda, hum udhar mun kr k rakhenge aapki taraf nahi dekhenge aap parda utar k aram se sojaiye

Razia; nahi koi baat nhi humen parde me neend ajayegi

Razia lay on the bed and stared at him, he was soon asleep.

Razia smiled , she recalled the moments they spent in this same motel.

"kitni ajeeb si kaifiyat he mirza, hum aapke saath hen par kitni dooriyan hen darmiyaan, par ye dooriyan zaruri hen, ta k hum jaan sken aapke dil ka haal" she thought.

In the morning when she woke up she saw him setting the breakfast

"are shehzadi aap jaag gai, jaldi se ja k gusal kr lijiye, yahan hamam ka intizam to ho nhi paya pr gusul khana bilkul saaf he aap jaiye, tab tak hum nashte k liye dastar khwan lagate hen" he said with a smile

She nodded, she returned after the bath and sat down.

"ye sab aapne banaya he?" she asked trying to sound curious

"jee humne banaya hai, nacheez k haath ka zaiqa chakh k bataiye kesa laga" he gave her some food, she hesitated

Altunia; hum bhi na, hum uthar mun kr lete hen aap itminaan se kha lijiye, aapke parde ka ehtaram krte hen hum.

Razia took a jalebi and smiled, she recalled their almost kiss and blushed bad.

Razia; jalebiyan boht umda banni hen

Altunia; aapko bhi jalebiyan pasand hen? hamari mohtarma ko bhi bht pasand thi, wo to esi deewani hui thi hamari jalebiyon ki k hamen tak haath na lagane de rhi thi, baantna to unhe ata hi na tha, bas jo unka he wo bas unka he

Razia smiled, yes she could never share any of her belongings, and when it came to him, she could never even share a jalebi that he made with any1 not even with him.

Razia; ab chalen?

Altunia; haan chaliye mohtarma

Razia; jee?

Altunia; mera matlab shehzaadi

They left the motel and got back on their horse.

Altunia; wo mohtarma, pta he aapko, mard ban k hamare saath kafile me ghus gai thi, ajeeb harqaten thi unki

he kept on telling her stories of his journey with mohtarma.

Razia; aapki baaton se lagta he k aapke dil k bht qareeb he wo mohtarma

Altunia; qareeb? wo to hamare dil ka ek hissa hen

Razia blushed. Suddenly their was an attack on them but the arrow missed them.

Altunia; budhe k sipahi phir agaye

He got off the the horse and started fighting

Soldier; chod de shehzadi ko namuraad, ye Sultan Yaldoz ki hone wali malika he

Altunia's eyes went red with anger, he fumed and punched the soldier hard.

Altunia; shehzadi sirf hamare dil ki malika hen samjhe, kisine unki taraf aankh bhi utha k dekha to ankhen niqal dega ye deewana

He fought with them all and they ran away

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega

Razia stood shocked, "dil ki malika" the words rang in her ears, Altunia came to her and grabbed her shoulders

Altunia; aap theek to hain na shehzadi

Razia looked into his eyes

Razia; aapne abhi kya kaha? hum..hum aapke dil ki malika hen?

Altunia smiled

Altunia; haan shehzadi, hum to tab hi apna dil haar bethe the jab humne aapko dargah main pehli baar dekha tha

Razia; agar aapke dil ki malika hum hen..to mohtarma kis dil ka hissa hen?

Altunia was shocked at her words...

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486792

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega

🤣

This update was AFSAW till infinity.👏 And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi

Iss update ko mila 11/10.👏👏

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Astoria
Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega
🤣

This update was AFSAW till infinity.👏 And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi
Iss update ko mila 11/10.👏👏

ash 🤗 u can't expect what would happen next😈

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

God how can i forget about that motel...😆... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...😳... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..
chor yaar riu...😕... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...😆

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauhars😆

and last scene... wow😳, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!😆

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...😛

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fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain 👏

Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.😆

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.😛 Banda confusion mein phas gaya.

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma. Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.😃

Edited by bhabhijaan - 10 years ago

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overactor

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ifians
God how can i forget about that motel...😆... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...😳... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..
chor yaar riu...😕... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...😆

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauhars😆

and last scene... wow😳, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!😆

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...😛

😃

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overactor

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: bhabhijaan
Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain 👏
Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.😆

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.😛 Banda confusion mein phas gaya.

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma. Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.😃

thank BJ 😆

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overactor

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Part_4

Altunia remained silent, confused. Razia came close to him and looked into his eyes.

Razia; boliye mirza, kon he aapki sachi mohobbat? hum ya phir mohtarma?

Altunia lowered his gaze, he sat down on a rock and put his hands on his face covering it.

He then stood up and coming to Razia he said

Altunia; hum aapse mohobbat krte hen shehzadi, mohtarma to hamari achi dost thi bas

Razia was shocked and angry, she pushed him

Razia; aap jhoot bol rhe hen, humne aapki ankhon me unke liye pyaar dekha he

ALtunia; nahi shehzadi wo pyar aapke liye tha

Razia; nahiii...aap mohtarma se hi mohobbat krte hen

Altunia; pr shehzadi hum..

Razia; nahi..(she held mirza's collars) aap humse mohobbat nhi krte smjhe aap, aap kr hi nahi skte , humse ek mulaqaat me mohobbat nhi hoskti aapko, aap mohtarma se hi mohobbat krte hen mirza hosh me aayie

Altunia; ama ajeeb aurat hen aap, hamari mohobbat ko thukrana hi hai to aise hi thukra dijiye ye kahan ka insaaf he k hamari mohobbat hi badal rhi hen aap

Razia; aap samjh nhi rhe, hum aapki mohobbat ko nhi thukra rhe

Altunia; dekhiye shehzadi, aapko hamari mohobbat qubool he to kahiye ye baten ghumaiye mat

Razia; hum baten nhi ghuma rhe, aap..aap aur mohtarma kitne qareeb a chuke the na, aapne hi to kaha tha k aap k dil ka hissa he wo

Altunia; haan to yaar dost dil ka hissa hote hen, aap ajeeb hen shehzadi, hum aapse mohobbat ka izhaar kr rhe hen aur aap ko mohtarma ki padi he

Razia; aap smjh kyun nhi rhe...acha hum aapse niqaah krlenge aap ki har baat manenge bas maan jayie ke aap mohtarma se mohobbat krte hen

Altunia; ama dunya me aap akeli aisi aurat hongi jo khud soutan ka intizam kr rhi hen, humse niqah bhi manzoor he agr hum mohtarma se ishq ka izhar kren, hua kya he aapko?

Razia; aap haan to kahiye, aap sb smjh jayenge

Altunia; dekhiye shehzadi, hum jhoot nhi bolte, aapko jo smjhna he smjh lijiye

Razia; theek he jb tak aap nhi manenge k aap mohtarma se mohobbat krte hen hum bhi aapka ishq manzoor nhi krenge

Altunia; mat keejiye, ab ghode pe to beth jayie wrna us budhe k sipahi phir ajayenge

they climbed the horse again and set off.

Razia was sad and thinking how to convince him.

"ye mirza, kuch smjhte hi nahi, agr esa hi tha to hamare itne qareeb kyun aye kyun mohtarma mohtarma krte unki zaban nhi thakti, ajeeb insaan hen ye, kese smjhayen inhe hum" she kept thinking.

Razia; hamen bhook lagi he, thakawat ho rhi he kahin rukiye aap

Altunia; koi basti aaye to rukte hen

Razia; jee

"hamara bas chale to inka yahin qatl kr k gaad den, koi itna bewaquf kese hoskta he, apni mohobbat ko hi na pehchane, khair..mirza aap jaante nhi aapne kis aafat se mohobat krli he, ab aapki khair nhi he, hum aapko ehsas krwa k rahenge k aap humse nhi balke humse mohobbat krte hen" she thought

Altunia; aap abhi tak ghusse me hen kya shehzadi?

Razia; nahi nahi, hum to bas aapka imtihaan le rhe the

ALtunia; wahi to hum soch rhe the ek aurat dusri aurat pe itni meherbaan kese

Razia smiled, "hamari meherbani ka to aapko andaza hi nhi mirza, aapko ehsas na krwa diya to hum bhi apne abu ki beti nhi" she said in her head

They reached a small village and then Altunia went to get some food for her, when he was returning he heard some woman talk

Woman1; Allah Rehem kre us bechari pr, sach me bada afsos ho rha he, keede paden us budhe sultan yaldoz ko

Woman2; sach me, shehzadi to bhaag gai ab us masum ladki ki kya galti thi

Altunia dropped the food in shock and rushed to the woman who were talking

Altunia; kon ladki kya hua? hamen bhi btaiye

Woman1; are kuch nhi miyan, wo sultan yaldoz, usne delhi ki shehzadi se niqah krna tha na, wo to bhaag gai pr

Altunia; par kya? (he was getting restless)

Woman2; to ghusse me aake us budhe ne ek masu ladki k saath zabardasti shadi krli

Altunia; kon ladki? (he was sweating now and panting)

Woman1; thi koi bechari ladki, multan se ghazni gai thi kuch madat maangne sultan se, bechari suna he badi mushqil se pohnchi thi aur us sultan ne..tauba

Altunia yelled, "nahiii...mohtarmaaa"

Razia smiled from a little distance.