SS - ESCAPE PLAN (Part-6 posted on pg 16)

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Esther christi

@Bhavya-Esther

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Very Nice Part Dear..

Dilsher & Paro convo vry nice,.

Rudra s in mission that's really good..

Without depending Paro,Rudra started investigation..

Laila, seriously i don't kno y i hate her.

I think the shadow may b Rudra,again he got wound bec of paro,.Its nt good,.He s d BSD officer,.He can able to stop her..

Thanks for PM.

Love

Bhavya

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thakurpreeti

@thakurpreeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Nice update & loved this chapter. So interesting Paro & dilsher convo. She said everything whatever in her mind & also said Rudra as Jallad to his father. She think dilsher is also prisoner. I think shadow is Rudra.

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Solitaire

@Solitaire

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Nice update.
Missed parud though I understand Rudra is on a mission :)
Guessing the shadow is Rudra's but did Paro really hurt him? :(
Please, please, please, please update soon.

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Poor Paro, her dreams of marriage woven with Bindi were so lovely and now she is so lost.
Dilsher needed warm up time to become nice to Paro. So will ignore the drunken part. It's cute how he asked for help and made her feel comfortable.
Thank you for only informant Laila. The other version of her personality is painful.
I love the fact that you are making Rudra and Aman do BSD stuff too. Tejwat has to get caught ultimately. That's when the story ends. Hero kills/captures villain.
Paro sliced Rudra, seriously? If yes, she is playing nurse in the next part.

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Paro is remembering the good times but they are not going to come back. Dilsher realises his error of shouting at her and extends the olive branch. Paro is not one to keep a grudge and accepts it without realising that he is rudra's father.

Hope Paro did not hurt Rudra in the darkness.

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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Nice chapter pree. Dilsher and Paro already warmed up to each other. Waiting for the cute relationship to blossom. And our major Saab is busy collecting proofs. I don't like laila, hope she is there for less time.
And hope it is not Rudra who came in dark.

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Esther christi

@Bhavya-Esther

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Dear pls update..

More than 2 months we are all waiting for ur perfect update...

Pls try to update..

Pls don't drop it..

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pree_28

@pree_28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Hello Bhavya 😊

So sorry for making you and others who are waiting for the update.. But genuinely I wouldn't be able to write at the moment. Because I am not getting much time after work and than family..to write.
Hope you understand.. But I will try sometime later and continue the story or write some different
one 😊 . Thanks for loving my story..

xx

Edited by pree_28 - 8 years ago