SS - ESCAPE PLAN (Part-6 posted on pg 16) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Dilsher assumes that it is Rudra's bride seeing her in Rudra's clothes and mehendi on her hands.
I think I can guess the dancer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiya Pree 🤗

So very sorry dear for not commenting off late. Pretty packed Summer holidays going on here😳

Read all three chapters in a go. Lovely writing I must say👏 Are you watching RR from first because I can visualize the minute details you are capturing! And love the ending you present in each chapter with the introduction of each character. So now swaying Laila has entered😉

Special thanks for keeping that rustic feeling intact 😳

Keep going bud.. I may be late and will be here sure to comment as always 👍🏼


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update pree,

Rudra & dilshar convo shows same how their relation as son & father in RR, dilshar thought paro is Rudra's bride, paro is so confused abt Rudra that he is her protector or beast. u r really amazing, write so many little little points, while reading this story i m feeling that i again start watching RR, i liked RR so much, u refresh our old memories, like it, waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Baap-beta, kya jodi hei bhagwan?

nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much for Bapusa's entry 🤗 He is one of my favorites. You have included the father-son usual banter too. Poor Paro would have shocked 😆.
And the wordless conversation that Parud have just using their eyes
Not happy about the Dupatta Lady 😡. Please keep her far from Chandagard.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update. ... 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved part 5 👏
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃



Thanks Lily 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Awesome Part..

Liked Dilsher & Rudra's raw convo..
Which makes me remember the begin relationship btw Father &Son in RangRasiya...
Rudra's warning & Paro's shock,.The same warning hold her as a prison in Rudra's house..
I think Laila who is stands at center at stage..
Thanks for PM..
Love.,
Bhavya



Thank you Dear 😳

Happy to know Father - Son confrontation.. reminded you of RR 😃
Yes, Rudra's warning was to keep her in house.. as she is a good runner 😆 (in this story she
attempted to run quite a few times).
Wait for next part.. to know who is this new entry 😎

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Solitaire

Loved it :D
I really love the you write, amazing :D
wanted more PaRud interactions though but it's okay, I love Dilsher :)
Please update soon and give us a PaRudlicious update.
Thanks for the pm dear.



Thank you so much Dear 😃
Ok...will surely write Parudlicious chapter soon 😉 But currently Rudra is on mission.. so you
will get Dilsher - Paro next 😛 Hope you will like it..!
Thanks for your comment

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Dilsher assumes that it is Rudra's bride seeing her in Rudra's clothes and mehendi on her hands.

I think I can guess the dancer.



Yes..and you can't blame Dilsher for it..😎 as Paro looked like newly wedded bride 😉

I am starting to wonder.. Am I so bad at concealing 😆

Thanks buddy for your comment

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