Parud OS:Beautiful Beginning..... - Page 2

Originally posted by: Meenakshi15

Reading...
Ok completed
Mano awesome loved it.
What a beautiful write up.
Let me ask you a question seriously this is your first OS really?Tell me frankly ok.
See when you said to lachu about writing a OS I was like ok she is like baby in writing OS but you know I was wrong you were awesome in writing this.
You know while reading your OS one cute smile in my face how romantic.
Never expected this,mano dear you are my rockstar.
I was very excited but no words to explain your beautiful write up.
Ok let me stop here or else you will fly like a bird.
Oops sorry lachu you are stalking IF from 10'o clock onwards sorry.
Mano see lachu is upset do one thing immediately write other OS then lachu will comment first.Lachu are you satisfied know.
Mano once again awesome write up.

Oops forget to mention awesome edits
Look at Ashu omg damn hot.
What is this mano romantic write up and hot rudra how can my week heart manages this.
Love you my dear... ❤️

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

OMG...Went for jogging just to stay awake. When I come back what I see?

Mano's OS!

Started reading... ...and what kind of an OS!

Amazing, superb, fantastic, capturing...Do I continue? Beautiful, sweet, heartwarming!

How beautiful OS and well written! And you said you can't write?

Rudwa was so disappointed as he believed that Paro forgot his birthday. But when he realized that she hadn't, got a gift and wanted something else from her.. a kiss, and more... ... and how Paro was so shy.

I can imagine the whole scene in my head.

Mano,

I knew that you are an artistic soul and again you proved it!

Now you just have to write more stories to us.

I admire your talent.

This will be a beautiful beginning of your writers career.

And the rest of you, who encouraged Mano... job well done!

JJ; if you see this, make Mano to write 420 words to your upcoming chapters! She is ready.

Mano, keep posting more!!! Will be waiting...

Originally posted by: Rummykub

Oye Mano ! I never knew you were a writer!! Just wow!!! Is this seriously your first piece? Awesome!!!

I liked how Paro celebrated Rudra's birthday here. Something very personal and just between the two.

I wanted something like this in the actual RR and not that whole family event and Paro dressed as rudra etc etc..

Loved it.

Thanks mano.

Yeh dil maange more.😃

Ps:loving all your stumped collages. Just swamped with asli duniya. Will try to drop by more often.

Originally posted by: JJKKL

And you said you cannot write.That was a lie Mano.

Perfect scene selection. ⭐️
Written so much in detail and so well. In fact you write the scenes in more detail than many other writers.👏
Rudra is greedy. After getting the wishes he wants more 😆

Mira, I saw your post. Agree with you.
Mano, get ready for 420 words...😃

Originally posted by: Rummykub

Oye Mano ! I never knew you were a writer!! Just wow!!! Is this seriously your first piece? Awesome!!!

I liked how Paro celebrated Rudra's birthday here. Something very personal and just between the two.

I wanted something like this in the actual RR and not that whole family event and Paro dressed as rudra etc etc..

Loved it.

Thanks mano.

Yeh dil maange more.😃

Ps:loving all your stumped collages. Just swamped with asli duniya. Will try to drop by more often.

Originally posted by: Meenakshi15

Yeh dil maange more raaa

How much more you want baby

Mano maybe she want more romance😆😆

Originally posted by: Rummykub

Oye Mano ! I never knew you were a writer!! Just wow!!! Is this seriously your first piece? Awesome!!!

I liked how Paro celebrated Rudra's birthday here. Something very personal and just between the two.

I wanted something like this in the actual RR and not that whole family event and Paro dressed as rudra etc etc..

Loved it.

Thanks mano.

Yeh dil maange more.😃

Ps:loving all your stumped collages. Just swamped with asli duniya. Will try to drop by more often.

Originally posted by: multimediaa

Oh! that's an overwhelming comment🤗

Thank u Meens

What do u mean by weak heart

I know u can take more of Ashu

Wah...wah... what a solution for Lachu

How do u come up with this ideas ?

seriously ,Rangeela punishment,this one and many more

And believe me its my first ever OS

Even thought that it would be my last too😆😆

mano

Are you happy too much appreciation coming from all.

Originally posted by: Meenakshi15

mano

Are you happy too much appreciation coming from all.

Don't fly like a bird ok

But you truly deserves this for your beautiful OS👏

Oooho mano my heart is very weak to handle his because he is with paro 😉

you know na mano I am very smart