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JJKKL

@JJKKL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aaliah3108
JJ!!!!I am speechless... this is one wonderful piece of writing and has the power to take away all the pain and regret and frustration and anger!

We need just this and everything will fall in place. Oh! My God... everything gets justified on it's own!!! you are a Rockstar!

May u be blessed !!!
😃

Thanks a lot Aaliah. For liking it and appreciating it so much. And for the blessings dear.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey nice one JJ! Loved the last part.

If I may suggest something, hope you do mind and please do not take it in the wrong way.

The bit where Rudra is watching the tape, rewinding and then you mentioned Dhruv's coughing brought him back to reality, according to the show - Rudra was in Myrah's room, alone, Dhruv was with Myrah, in Rudra's room. I know it is a fiction, and you are allowed to tweak things, but I presume that you went with the scenes depicted and did a splendid job. I feel you were testing us as readers, maybe? Not sure at this moment!😳

We do not know what he saw and hope the CVs do not brush it aside, leave a gaping hole. You did an amazing job with blending our thoughts and the story recollection, as well as future progression.

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1sarun

@1sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice writeup, loved reading it. Hope we'll get see something like this in the show too.

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payal

@ps_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I really want this to happen in the show.

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Navya

@Navyya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Very nice JJKKL ...can't wait for the next chapter.

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persadian

@persadian

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

this is so apt, you have handed the cvs a get out of jail free card, with Rudra just being able to stumble over the fact that he instantly realises its Paro with amnesia, with time slipping through all our hands, to be able to end in this manner, would be fine for me👏