A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 93

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anisa79

Cant believe its over! loved the whole ff and their relationship,cant wait for the sequel!!


Thank you. An end to one journey marks the beginning of another. So stay tuned.
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Posted: 10 years ago
So there was a surprise wedding! How the man has changed. From the BSD officer who threatened with marriage to this romantic thoughtful guy trying to fulfill all her wishes. He has come a long way indeed. It was so thoughtful of Mohini to do so much for Rudra. After all the bitterness of the past this sweetness is overwhelming.
The surprising element was thakursa's decision to give his wife her son if that was the last thing he could do for,her. His love for her stood above his greed.

Feel sorry that u r ending the story but then it had reached its conclusion. But an epilouge would be great.

Congrats on completing a beautiful story about a beautiful couple. Your writing style made it all the more enjoyable. Thank you. Looking forward for more in the future.
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a very good ending to the wonderful RR. Glad the way Mohini and Sumer changed in your FF. The wedding celebrations which was halted in the mela ground finally could be completed there with the correct set of vows.

Glad that it is ending so well.
Sad that the FF is ending


Loved the wedding invite which you sent.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

A lovely final chapter...enjoyed this ride with you.
I could vividly see Parud in all their wedding finery...and Bapusa's emotions was touching. Your tale had more family bonding than the show...with Singh & Aman an integral part of Paro's life. It seemed more real to me.

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Awaiting your follow up work.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated on page no: 127 Rithu,
sorry for the delay.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG..Sis...Did u see my comment...😲😲😲

We both wrote almost same to same...am dumbstruck...we both think alike in many ways..

BTW I loved those collages😳😳

Hugs 🤗


Sorry Rithu..couldn't contain the excitement😆😆😆..Trust me we didn't know each others until posting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii Rithu,

Lovely update, want to same in serial with Parud happy ending n u did it very well, every emotion n everything in this, love it so much, can't believe this is over, want to read further n more, plz write more story abt Parud,
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

So there was a surprise wedding! How the man has changed. From the BSD officer who threatened with marriage to this romantic thoughtful guy trying to fulfill all her wishes. He has come a long way indeed. It was so thoughtful of Mohini to do so much for Rudra. After all the bitterness of the past this sweetness is overwhelming.

The surprising element was thakursa's decision to give his wife her son if that was the last thing he could do for,her. His love for her stood above his greed.

Feel sorry that u r ending the story but then it had reached its conclusion. But an epilouge would be great.

Congrats on completing a beautiful story about a beautiful couple. Your writing style made it all the more enjoyable. Thank you. Looking forward for more in the future.


Thank you. Loved the way you put it. He has tried to wipe away all the things he did mocking her beliefs by adding making sure everything is extra special.
Mohini realised long back that Mala was the enemy not her nephew.
Tejawat's only redeeming factor was that he loved his wife, I couldn't rob him of that in the end.
I have already posted the epilogue for the story. I will write a sequel little later to tie up other loose ends.
Thank you so much. Reading your comments and interacting with you all made it enjoyable for me.
I'll let you know when I write something new.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JJKKL

<font size="3" color="#000099">That was a very good ending to the wonderful RR. Glad the way Mohini and Sumer changed in your FF. The wedding celebrations which was halted in the mela ground finally could be completed there with the correct set of vows.

Glad that it is ending so well.
Sad that the FF is ending</font>

<font size="3" color="#000099">Loved the wedding invite which you sent.😆</font>


Thank you. Mohini and Sumer are among my favourites, wanted them to come out of their bitterness in the end.
This story started at the point when the mela wedding lay abandoned after the press conference. So it felt right to end it here.
I was sad too. Until I realized how the end of one story is the beginning of another.
Parud never really had a wedding invite did they. Pls make sure they do in your story.

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