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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful dear. I liked it so much missing them a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Rithu,
I don't have any words to properly express how happy and emotional I'm from the time I read the story.
This collage is just to show my craziness for your story😃


Excellent choice of Mandap, the necklace, the turban.
The butterfly pendant was awesome... I like when the writers don't miss small details like this.😳
Paro the angel dressed up in golden attire ... golden not only outside but also inside
White for Rudra just as Paro wished... reflects his peace with family, Dilsher and most importantly his heart at peace.

Just like Paro I became emotional when Mr&Mrs.V.K offered for kanyadaan... the feeling 'll be too overwhelming I can totally relate to that as my bro and bhabhi did my kanyadaan.😊
You didn't miss any one Aman bro and blue Titli as usual showing Paro her destiny... so touching.
Rithu you ended the story with happy note and I agree with every line you wrote in your author note.
Paro suffered a lot and she deserved a happy ending.









How I wish RR ended like this but now I'm sure whenever I feel low and missing RR I'll read this last chapter.
From the bottom of my heart Thank you!
I'll look forward for next...

Edited by KhushiParo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my my ...Rithu I can't express how happy and excited right now after reading this chapter...

You definitely saved the best for the last gal...My heartfelt thanks for this beautiful chapter first of all👏👏..

So many emotions are jumping inside me right now , that am at loss of words where to start..

Thank you so much for taking my wish and incorporating here with your version of "Main Tu Hamesha"..these words sounds beautiful in every version...

Loved how you brought all family members with an unique duty of fulfilling my angel's dream wedding..

I was literally in tears when I saw "Mr and Mrs Singh" came forward for her Kanyadhaan..I donno why I got so emotional on that part that even now feeling teary eyed while typing this..Maybe am so overwhelmed to see Paro getting the much deserved respect and love in your version which was denied cruelly in the original..

Loved all the beautiful wedding attires..both are indeed looking gorgeous and dashing..in my imagination😳..

Loved Aman's thoughtful gesture..how sweet of him..a Rose garden for our Laal Pari..and u brought back my Rukmini Titli too for my Pari...

And my tractorwala dil really took my dil today...my cutiepie brought the most important aspect of marriage...Mangalsutra..and am just overwhelmed with Mohini's gesture...She is indeed the power pillar on that haveli...and that Titli addition shows your master brilliance Rithu 👏👏...

These seven vows will keep me happy for seven lives that this is my PARUD happy ending which ended with their blissful marriage...

Today I can't be angry on Teju and Mala too coz she is the reason for Rudra and he is the reason for Paro to be Rudra's paro..am just too happy right now..ignoring all other things...

So happy to see Dilsher feeling content with his son's new happy family which is starting with his own family (Dhannu and Mohini) standing beside him...


I donno what I have written so far..but I couldn't stop writing..Am just too emotional and happy at the same time that you fulfilled my wish to see PARUD happy union with all blessings especially with Loving and Caring Rudra and my Respected Paro...the way they both deserve each other...



And for the lovely invitation





Lastly




.You have given me an ending which I will cherish in my heart till RR resides in it..and that is forever...








PS:

You are an awesome writer Rithu 👍🏼 though it is coming from another non-literate member..I meant it..



Edited by deepsel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally they are married

Good times are ahead

By chance are you doing an epilogue

Wish you write more PaRud stories, I for one love reading them
Edited by seeta_naips - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cant believe its over! loved the whole ff and their relationship,cant wait for the sequel!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tinamehta

What a beautiful chapter and a wonderful ending. I wish this was how Rudra and Paro's story ended. Main tu hamesha. Loved her lehenga. Glad you added the picture and gave us a visual treat. So happy everyone was there :) Looks like there is something going to brew between Mala and Ranawat. Is there going to be a part 2? Will there be an epilogue? I want to know if Paro had 2 sons and Rudra the daughter he wanted. And thank you for such a beautiful ending.


Thank you. I wanted a happy ending to their story too, hate it when love stories end in tragedy.
I wanted everyone to see the picture I'm trying to paint, so added them. Everyone had to be there to make it special for Paro, she deserved it.
There won't be any trouble if Mala stays away from Rudra and the Haveli. There will be a part 2 which I will start working on post Christmas. I already wrote an epilogue when I was mourning Paro's death in the show. It has her entire family and their interactions. Check it out if you haven't read it, the link is in page 1.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

Beautiful dear. I liked it so much missing them a lot


Thank you. I miss them too.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Oh my my ...Rithu I can't express how happy and excited right now after reading this chapter...</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">You definitely saved the best for the last gal...My heartfelt thanks for this beautiful chapter first of all👏👏..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">So many emotions are jumping inside me right now , that am at loss of words where to start..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I was literally in tears when I saw "Mr and Mrs Singh" came forward for her Kanyadhaan..I donno why I got so emotional on that part that even now feeling teary eyed while typing this..Maybe am so overwhelmed to see Paro getting the much deserved respect and love in your version which was denied cruelly in the original..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Loved Aman's thoughtful gesture..how sweet of him..a Rose garden for our Laal Pari..and u brought back my Rukmini Titli too for my Pari...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">And my tractorwala dil really took my dil today...my cutiepie brought the most important aspect of marriage...Mangalsutra..and am just overwhelmed with Mohini's gesture...She is indeed the power pillar on that haveli...and that Titli addition shows your master brilliance Rithu👏👏...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">These seven vows will keep me happy for seven lives that this is my PARUD happy ending which ended with their blissful marriage...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Today I can't be angry on Teju and Mala too coz she is the reason for Rudra and he is the reason for Paro to be Rudra's paro..am just too happy right now..ignoring all other things...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">So happy to see Dilsher feeling content with his son's new happy family which is starting with his own family (Dhannu and Mohini) standing beside him...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I donno what I have written so far..but I couldn't stop writing..Am just too emotional and happy at the same time that you fulfilled my wish to see PARUD happy union with all blessings especially with Loving and Caring Rudra and my Respected Paro...the way they both deserveeach other...</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">You are an awesome writer Rithu👍🏼though it is coming from another non-literate member..I meant it..</font>





Thank you. Deeps, I don't blame you for the different emotions jumping inside. I felt it when I wrote this chapter and again when I edited it. Even know when I'm reading the comments my heart is feeling a little heavy.
'Main tu hamesha' changed how ILUs sound. The traditional words sound so common whether its your son telling you that or your husband. The RR words emphasise the soul mate connection that Parud had. My fever adled brain forgot about it. Thanks for reminding me of them again.
I wanted it to be an small and intimate ceremony. After the fanfare of the fake wedding where nothing had meaning, Rudra owed his bride a wedding where everything was special.
The drunk wedding was one of the episodes I never rewatched. It was too cruel for my enjoyment. I prefer my way though I understand Rudra had his reasons to be so upset and did make it up later.
The Singhs and Aman are Paro's family, they were the people who supported her when Rudra turned his back on her. Had to give them their due. And Rukmini always attends important events in Parud's life.
Sumer has really come around and earned his own love story by helping Parud find their joy. The sequel will have his love story. Titli, rose, rudraskh, bangles are all special ingredients in the story. Can't miss them.
I stole the seven vows from another site, so won't take any credit for that. Should I add a disclaimer for that?
Mala and Tejawat are proof that God takes care of his children and no one takes away the happiness they deserve. Whatever crap these two pulled,Parud finally got their happy ending.
Dillu is a happy man. All the damage he had done is now undone.
I'm so glad that my version was able to touch you and thank you for the lamba comment. I live long comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

Finally they are married

Good times are ahead

By chance are you doing an epilogue

Wish you write more PaRud stories, I for one love reading them


Good times indeed.
I have already written the epilogue. I will start on the sequel a little later.
Thank you for your encouragement.

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