A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Rithu.
Will add more ...

Ok! Back..
Hmm... You surprised me again.😕
I expected fireworks between Parud😃 but ... well you did give but in a different way.😆

This chapter focused a lot more from Dilsher's POV and glad to know he was also in army, in the serial he was a business man, but this suits more for his attitude.
I like how Kakisa showing lot of affection for Rudra but is it for her own profit I mean for Sumer or is she really feeling affection? I'll take the latter and be happy for Rudra as he missed all these when he was a kid. As Rudra started considering them as family I hope Kakisa also does the same without expecting any profit.😆

Well coming to the important scene...you touched very sensitive issue and I'm very eager for Rudra's reaction how he handles it now. I know he'll follow the bus 😳He can not just let her go alone. He can not see Paro hurt physically or emotionally anymore. He gave lot of pain and it's his responsibility now to make amends.
It's amazing how you changed it's Rudra who chases butterflies and as Kakisa said he's chasing now also, that too a precious one.😊

Ok I'll stop now for the sake of you and all who might accidentally read this.
Will wait for your update and for the surprise you and deeps planning.
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PS: Requesting to make Paro smile in next update

Edited by KhushiParo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi nice update... Felt bad for Paro... But atleast Rudra realises his mistake now... Anger destroys not only him but also others... Waiting to see wat he s gonna do to undo his mistake...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww... he loves her. Has remorse in his eyes. How emotional was this chapter. Rudra loves his titli. Now he has to convince her that he truly loves her.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful chapter Rithu!
Great how you incorporated Dilsher and Mala's story and how he restored his faith in women through Paro and wants the same for his son
Good that Mohini seems to have changed too and then those horrible women - quite rightly it is the women who always suffer more and Rudra can now see it !
I loved that he was riding next to the bus he will catch this butterfly 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
rudra has his own way of showing care towards paro. sth which was lost during the serial
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rithu, Wonderful chapter, amazing story, after reading ur chapter desperately waiting for next chapter ''''
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super update rithu
You have beautifully written about Dilsher and his repentance. And his loving nature towards Paro
Sighs Rudra really cares for Paro but his way of showing it is really different
Felt so bad for Paro when those ladies spoke ill of her
Cant wait to read more
Hope u are having an awesome vacation and thanks for the update
Take care
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font color="#6600ff" size="2">What an update darling...Ummauh</font>

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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">I loved it...👏👏</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Your last line made me sit and read the whole chapter before proceeding to other posts</font>
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Major Rudra Pratap Ranavat driving next to the bus looking at her with remorse in his eyes.


<font size="2" color="#6600ff">How lovely and mature the way their heart speaks for each other...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I liked how you squeezed Mals's story in between..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Mohini's character is churning out well..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I am surprised to see Rudra's fondness towards Titli😉...Liked Mohini's comment when he ran behind Paro😆😆</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">All isgoing well..I am scared what bomb is going to explode in their peaceful life..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Now Love is in the air..Let it blossom before the inevitable strikes..</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Cheers🤗</font>
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Thanks deeps. It was supposed to be a mature love story, so trying to keep things as sensible as possible.
Mala affected how Mohini and Dilsher viewed people. Her carelessness made them cold, calculative and cynical. Though there were not angels themselves, its important for them to reflect on that before they start to make the best use of the second chance they are getting.
My son was chasing butterflies yesterday, that's when I realized most children do that. Its only a very few of them like our Paro befriend them for life. The rest of us find the same joy in other things as we grow up like our Rudra.
The bomb is a couple of chapters or more ahead. Smooth sailing for now.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely update. Nice to see the sober version of Mohini.

Ranawat has undergone so much of pain, but in the processes hurt others. If Paro could heal Rudr then Dilsher is no surprise.
What you say is so true that people do not try to find out the truth they just come to conclusions and that is the truth for them. They do not consider the hurt they are given others by this. Paro wanted to spend a day with loved ones and they spoilt it for her. Hope Rudr will be able to console her.


Thank you. Mohini is sobering down now as her rule over the haveli is not challenged by Rudra or Dilsher. They are staying away from the household matters and slowly trying to help Sumer settle down. So she is slowly warming up to them.
Dilsher was fond of Paro from the moment he realised that she understood the workings of Rudra's twisted head. Rudra is the harder person to win over because of the khoobsurat aurat syndrome.
Paro is a sweetheart, she will not let such people rain on her parade.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Lovely update Rithu😊I specially loved the last part where he just did not leave her but followed her to Jaipur. .I somehow have a tinge bit of more respect towards men who somehow try to undo the damage / hurt they caused their women by standing up for them against others. I have always liked Rudra for standing up for his lady and having a spine.😊


Thank you. Rudra cannot relax unless he is sure Paro is alright. Its nice when men try to set things right and I like Rudra for standing up for Paro. He was her rakshak in every single way.

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