A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 25

Wow, a kakisa so mellow. Nice.

things are looking up at the haveli but want to see a parud confrontation. thora lovie dovie

Nice update, enjoy the complete chapter bt only missing Parud scences, waiting for next update

nice chapter Rithu - more on the family - I love how you ahve developed the rest of the characters and given them all proper stories - agree with you I think it would be great for Rudra to take charge!in the romance - - also it is good to take things slow and not have the overnight confessions of love!

I really like how much meat you've given to the characters. Like, in real life, the same person is both bad and good. TV charactes usually seem very 2-dimensional. Maybe that's why I prefer books. Mohini and Mala's story is pretty complicated, and it explains why Mohini wants the Haveli so badly. In the show it just comes across as an obsession, but here she seems like a real concerned mother. The methods are wrong , but she isn't in love with the Haveli itself, she just sees it as a means to secure her children's future. I would really like to know Mala's side too. I wouldn't have minded it if Mala had turned out to be a cold hearted woman, but you know the TRP junta would never stand for it.

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

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<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Wow! what an update. No Parud together but it kept me read and enjoy it.😊It seems Rudra is a lot different in your story and I'm liking it.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">So Rudra knows how to bring Kakisa to his side that's why all that phone drama😉. Kakisa was jealous and destroyed one family of course masa and bapusa also at fault.😔</font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Waiting for next update eagerly as I'm expecting Rudra will be surprised and happy to see dear Paro.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Have a nice journey Rithu, will wait for update.😳</font>

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Kakisa and Rudra are cut from the same cloth, they will always be able to trick each other to get what they want.
I honestly feel everyone was at fault when Mala went away. Danveer didn't stand up to his brother. Mohini gave bad advice. Tejawat took advantage of her desperation. Dilsher handled his problems badly. And Mala just gave up.
I'll try and post the next part by Thursday. Thank you.

Originally posted by: SPraba

Super update rithu
This one kept me hooked despite no Parud scenes
Well rudra is always a smart cookkie and he knew how to just crack at his kakisa. And she feel for it
Glad Paro decided to visit her jija and shanthi. Cant wait to see Parud meet
Sighs RR over and will try to relive Parud moments thru your FF
Thanks for pm and have a safe journey
God bless

Thanks Prabha. I am glad I was able to hold your attention despite Parud's absence.
Rudra and kaki are made for each other, love their schemes.
I like Maithili and Paro scenes so added it in.
Will drop by as much as I can. I miss IF and RR a lot.

Originally posted by: Crazy410

Wonderful chapter Ritu... and thanks for the pm too.

Paro and Rudra are separated - I had wanted this too in the show. Your version is very good giving us the back ground story - loved it.

Thank you. I never wanted Parud separation on the show as I love watching Sanish onscreen together. But now that I think about it, it would have been better than the standing in rain and the laddoo track that followed.