A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 28

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Awesome update Rithu.
Will add more ...

Ok! Back..

Hmm... You surprised me again.😕

I expected fireworks between Parud😃but ... well you did give but in a different way.😆

This chapter focused a lot more from Dilsher's POV and glad to know he was also in army, in the serial he was a business man, but this suits more for his attitude.

I like how Kakisa showing lot of affection for Rudra but is it for her own profit I mean for Sumer or is she really feeling affection? I'll take the latter and be happy for Rudra as he missed all these when he was a kid. As Rudra started considering them as family I hope Kakisa also does the same without expecting any profit.😆

Well coming to the important scene...you touched very sensitive issue and I'm very eager for Rudra's reaction how he handles it now.I know he'll follow the bus😳He can not just let her go alone.He can not see Paro hurt physically or emotionally anymore. He gave lot of pain and it's his responsibility now to make amends.

It's amazing how you changed it's Rudra who chases butterflies and as Kakisa said he's chasing now also, that too a precious one.😊

Ok I'll stop now for the sake of you and all who might accidentally read this.

Will wait for your update and for the surprise you and deeps planning.

🤗

PS: Requesting to make Paro smile in next update

Thanks Sushmita. Dilsher is not the businessman type, it was either the aristocrat who lived on his inheritance or the wounded soldier who loved his job. I felt the latter fit better since his brother and son are both in the BSD. And yes, its matches his attitude well.
Mohini is slowly starting to see Rudra separate from her sister, so she is able to realise that he is a nice young man after all. And his efforts towards Sumer's job is helping smoothen things between them.
A fake engagement will set tongues wagging in most villages. Rudra and Paro will have to face them eventually and sort things out.
He had to follow the bus, he is her rakshak. So has to stick around till she is alright.
Regarding the butterflies, most kids do it when they are young before other shiny toys get their attention. Except for our Paro who held on to a simple joy right upto adulthood. He will get his titli, she was always his.
Smile? I thought I would make Paro blush for you in the next update 😉

Originally posted by: kulfi89

Hi nice update... Felt bad for Paro... But atleast Rudra realises his mistake now... Anger destroys not only him but also others... Waiting to see wat he s gonna do to undo his mistake...

Thank you. I felt bad for putting Paro in such a situation but it was necessary for Rudra to realise his mistake. His ruthless has done a lot of damage, it will take a lot of explanations on everyone's part to fix this.

Originally posted by: Crazy410

Awww... he loves her. Has remorse in his eyes. How emotional was this chapter. Rudra loves his titli. Now he has to convince her that he truly loves her.😛

Thank you. Soon they will both accept their attraction towards each other.

Originally posted by: neet2407

Wonderful chapter Rithu!
Great how you incorporated Dilsher and Mala's story and how he restored his faith in women through Paro and wants the same for his son
Good that Mohini seems to have changed too and then those horrible women - quite rightly it is the women who always suffer more and Rudra can now see it !
I loved that he was riding next to the bus he will catch this butterfly 😉

Thank you. Dilsher and Mala were the one who created the Khoobsurat aurat syndrome. And Paro will destroy it.
Mohini is warming upto Rudra as she sees he takes up after his father and not her sister.
That's the way the world works unfortunately, men get away more easily.
He can't stay away from Paro when she is upset.

Originally posted by: henamani

rudra has his own way of showing care towards paro. sth which was lost during the serial

Thank you. Rudra may be a little unorthodox when it comes to showing concern but still makes the effort.

Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Rithu, Wonderful chapter, amazing story, after reading ur chapter desperately waiting for next chapter ''''

Thank you. Next update on Sunday.

Originally posted by: SPraba

Super update rithu
You have beautifully written about Dilsher and his repentance. And his loving nature towards Paro
Sighs Rudra really cares for Paro but his way of showing it is really different
Felt so bad for Paro when those ladies spoke ill of her
Cant wait to read more
Hope u are having an awesome vacation and thanks for the update
Take care

Thanks Prabha. I wished they has shown Dilsher's softening towards women before Mala returned because it was mainly due to Paro and Maithili that he realised that all women are not bad. I love his relationship with Paro too.
Felt bad for Paro while writing this but it was necessary.
I'm having a blast but still need my Parud daily dose, so keep writing.
Take care.

@Shafoo, Marriedlove - thanks for dropping by.
@mpat - looking forward to your view on the story so far.

awww rudra went all the way with her following her bus! so cute, loved the chapter but when they get back together, missing them together!

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Thanks Sushmita. Dilsher is not the businessman type, it was either the aristocrat who lived on his inheritance or the wounded soldier who loved his job. I felt the latter fit better since his brother and son are both in the BSD. And yes, its matches his attitude well.
Mohini is slowly starting to see Rudra separate from her sister, so she is able to realise that he is a nice young man after all. And his efforts towards Sumer's job is helping smoothen things between them.
A fake engagement will set tongues wagging in most villages. Rudra and Paro will have to face them eventually and sort things out.
He had to follow the bus, he is her rakshak. So has to stick around till she is alright.
Regarding the butterflies, most kids do it when they are young before other shiny toys get their attention. Except for our Paro who held on to a simple joy right upto adulthood. He will get his titli, she was always his.
Smile? I thought I would make Paro blush for you in the next update 😉