A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 23

Rithu thank u 4 replying me, I m happy that u r not ending this n we can understand, u r busy in real life,we will wait 4 ur updates

slowly and steadily they are gaining access to each other's hearts

Nice update Rithu 😊 They are slowly becoming closer and closer

Originally posted by: Crazy410

First I want to thank you for the PM

And now coming to your story... U already know that I love it. I love all the investigation stuff for Tejawat. This is my fav kind of story - action and suspense mixed in with lots of romance.

The sexual tension between them as they are being drawn to each other was perfect.

Waiting for more.😊

Thank you. I wanted Rudra and Aman to do more than just talk on the phone and look at files while wearing a uniform or riding a jeep. So I added a dash of action and suspense.
Creating sexual tension is a bit of a challenge, I'm happy you liked it.

Originally posted by: custodian75

I was expecting a more detailed scene from the barn. No problem there will be many opportunities to come.

A more detailed barn scene would have dragged the story so I rushed through it. As you said there will be many opportunities to come, the story has a long way to go.

Originally posted by: henamani

slowly and steadily they are gaining access to each other's hearts

They always had a strong trust factor, now love is slowly blossoming in between them.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Nice update Rithu😊They are slowly becoming closer and closer

Thank you for the PM .

Thank you, glad you liked it. They are no longer fighting the attraction now they just have to acknowledge it to themselves and to each other.

This is such a beautiful story. Reading it today, of all days, makes my heart weep. I wish they had gone this way. Or even a fraction of this. I don't know if it would get ratings, since nothing sensible on Indian TV ever does, but at least we would have been saved from the iron laddoos, the drunken 8 vachan shadi, Paro falling in love after 5 seconds of seeing the doll, etc. Thank you for writing this. I love that you have given them time and space and allowed Rudra , Paro and the rest of the characters to grow. and your epilogue- wow. Truly, Paro deserved to die happily after living to a ripe old age.

Originally posted by: SS88

This is such a beautiful story. Reading it today, of all days, makes my heart weep. I wish they had gone this way. Or even a fraction of this. I don't know if it would get ratings, since nothing sensible on Indian TV ever does, but at least we would have been saved from the iron laddoos, the drunken 8 vachan shadi, Paro falling in love after 5 seconds of seeing the doll, etc. Thank you for writing this. I love that you have given them time and space and allowed Rudra , Paro and the rest of the characters to grow. and your epilogue- wow. Truly, Paro deserved to die happily after living to a ripe old age.

Read it again on Monday. You will feel better by then. I hated the laddoos and the drunken wedding. Paro loved Rudra for quite awhile before the CVs let her admit it.
I needed the epilogue for my peace of mind. I hope it gave you the same feeling.
Thank you for your comments.

Hi how i wish all dis had happened on the show.. Thanks for this update... ur FF is all that could have been... waiting for ur next😊