A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 22

This is lovely Rithu! I liked how they are becoming friends yet painfully aware of their own reactions to the others presence - both jealous of others and desperately want each other but being too afraid to say it out loud! I agree with you Tejawat was the real villain in Rangrasiya and should be there till the end - I wish they had shown what happened to him in the TV show
Eagerly awaiting your next update - what will happen the next morning ?

Originally posted by: ultimaterudra

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#993300">Thank You Rithu ...dedicating a chapter to me😳</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#993300">I have not read your FF will have more time next week ...will have to catch up on reading JJ's and your FF's . Thank You so very much .</font>

You're welcome. Do drop by next week sometime.

Originally posted by: JJKKL

<font color="#000099" size="2">Very nice update. Your words flow so well. I should learn this art from you. When can we start the classes ?
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My words end up taking a life of their own. I should take classes from you to learn how to stick to the storyline and not let my fingers run away with the keyboard.
Thank you.

Originally posted by: neet2407

This is lovely Rithu! I liked how they are becoming friends yet painfully aware of their own reactions to the others presence - both jealous of others and desperately want each other but being too afraid to say it out loud! I agree with you Tejawat was the real villain in Rangrasiya and should be there till the end - I wish they had shown what happened to him in the TV show
Eagerly awaiting your next update - what will happen the next morning ?

Yup, they are both unaware of how to take things further since they don't know how the other feels. Out of respect, they wouldn't want to force each other into anything. In the show we had divine intervention through which Paro took the leap. Here I want Rudra to take charge.

Letting go of Tejawat was what brought in tapasya track and laddoo track both I couldn't relate too. So I don't want to do the same mistake.

The next update will take a little longer as my real life is getting hectic.

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font size="3" color="#6600ff">Rithu ...That was an awesome update...Wow almost whole chapter dedicated to PARUD...Deepa kush huyi😆😆😆...</font>

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<font size="3" color="#6600ff">These lines...what beautiful lines...girl you are an awesome writer Rithu👏👏</font>

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<font size="3">He was scared, the more he let her in, the more it would hurt when she leaves</font>

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<font size="3" color="#6600ff">I loved the delicate tension between them and also how you brought the doll story now..</font>

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<font size="3" color="#6600ff">Glad to see Aman getting equal footage unlike original series..😆😆I would like to see his love life too😳..</font>

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<font size="3" color="#6600ff">Wonderful Rithu...keep updating...🤗</font>

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<font size="3" color="#ff00cc">Special thanks to Shweta...That was beautiful banner dear..👏👏U added more spice to Rithu's FF...😉</font>

I had a feeling, Deepa would be happy with so much Parud 😊

The doll is their connection, its has to remind them of the bus stop memory when both of them were facing difficult times yet managed to smile at each other.

Aman is a nice who deserves to be more than Rudra's right hand man. So giving him a wife and mother. Not sure how much attention I'll be giving to it though.

Glad you enjoyed the update.

First I want to thank you for the PM

I was expecting a more detailed scene from the barn. No problem there will be many opportunities to come.