A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 11

The dance on one of the most romantic numbers ever. Loved the way their emotions and longings were following the song lyrics.

Lovely update. Loved the song. One of my favorites. The lyrics are so meaningful.

Lovely update Rithu.
Pal pal dil ke pas ... Nice song selection
Their feelings,desire and longing to be together you nailed it..
God! Just for bumping into Paro that much commotion 😆 ofcourse he had to as he's Rudra and
Paro of course being Paro can not see Rudra hurt aawww, so sweet.
Slow and steady wins the race.
👏
Waiting for next update hoping it'll be soon and with more sweetness. 😊

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Thank you. What is your name, firsttimehere?

Originally posted by: Zeeliciousxo

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#996666">Awww I loved this chapter, it was sooo sweet❤️You described the emotions both felt during just one dance sooo well. I loved it! And the end was so sweet!! Rudra becoming upset over a clumsy waiter hurting Paro and Paro crying because Rudra was hurtThese two will just kill me!! And I love how you explain both Rudra and Paro's thoughts so well - I LOVE the thought process you provide for both characters, it is so rational and logical and so them. And I love how you are taking their story very slow - the CVs rushed a lot of things between them in the show. Ok clearly I'm rambling now😆Will stop!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#996666">Looking forward to the next chapter!😳</font>

I'm glad you liked this chapter. I love paying attention to Parud's emotions on screen, Sanish are such a delight and the range they show us are beyond words. So its easy to guess what they may think or feel at any given point.
I'm happy you're not disappointed with the pace seeing as I'm stretching the story a lot. But the initial attraction, the realisation that it can evolve into a deeper feeling and create life long bonds are the best part of a love story. I didn't like the way it was rushed in the show.
Feel free to ramble on, I love reading your comment. The next update will have a lot of sweet moments too.

Originally posted by: SPraba

Lovely update rithu. It was perfect. Loved everything. The dance, to the way u have expressed how Rudra and Paro feel for each other, the desire, the way rudra goes bserk when the waiter bumps into Paro. Superb rithu. Sighs this makes me wonder what a brilliant show RR could have been only if we did not have to succumb to TRP pressure and all.
Thanks for the pm and looking forward to the next update

Thanks Prabha. Glad you liked it.
Rudra never has a good handle on his anger does he, especially if Paro is around.
TRPs
and internal politics killed the show.

Originally posted by: Crazy410

The dance on one of the most romantic numbers ever. Loved the way their emotions and longings were following the song lyrics.

Lovely chapter.

Thank you. It was a beautiful moment for a beautiful couple.

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely update. Loved the song. One of my favorites. The lyrics are so meaningful.

The longing for each other was palpable.

Glad you liked it. I heard the song recently on TV, thought it would be perfect for the situation.

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Lovely update Rithu.
Pal pal dil ke pas ... Nice song selection
Their feelings,desire and longing to be together you nailed it..
God! Just for bumping into Paro that much commotion 😆 ofcourse he had to as he's Rudra and
Paro of course being Paro can not see Rudra hurt aawww, so sweet.
Slow and steady wins the race.
👏
Waiting for next update hoping it'll be soon and with more sweetness. 😊

Thanx Khushi, glad you liked it. Rudra has to be a little possessive and Paro extra sweet as usual. More sweetness to come.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

HI Rithu , Am Vani ..

Nice update in chapter 16 .. gotto see what and how Rudra and Paro were feeling / thinking of each other 😊( A thing which we did not get much to see on the show ) ..and I liked how you kept them to their characters - whether it was what their inner thoughts were during the song or how their reaction was when waiter crashed in and Rudra got hurt .. 😊 Loved the last bit when Rudra allowed himself to follow Paro's lead😊

Thanx Vani. I liked the last bit too. Its about time Rudra lets someone else take the lead.