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Libra16

@Libra16

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

I would never be able to write such a devastated dark song based os on PaRud.. I love them too much. And I would need immense strength to give them a sad ending. I am too weak willed when it comes to PaRud..

But thank you for the comment! I hope you liked reading this!

Actually, for some reason, I still want Rudra to back old Rudra.. and Paro to taken away from him!! I really want rangrasiya be scary and intense - while Rudra and Paro are one ! Does it make sense.😕

By the way, u write well!👏

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tvbug2011
Gorgeous story, SZ!! Left me with a lump in my throat How effortlessly you tug at the heartstrings. I was just whining about the lack of a good read, and lo and behold you give us an absolute gem. So beautifully written that you don't even notice the words because you're too busy seeing the story unfurl before your eyes; so caught up in the characters' agony that you beg for surcease.

Please don't stop here. Please tell us what happens next - give Nandini and Aman their happily ever after. Pretty please. 😃

Thanks so much Sabz!! I know that the heart wants to see Nandini and Aman have at least a teeny weeny bit of happiness, but I really never picturized a happy ending here. Its just such a dark song. How can one even think of anything joyous when it's playing...

And like a thousand hugs for calling this a good read! Seriously! I am just very idiotic when it comes to things I write.. Mostly unbearable.. =]

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Don't stop here - please. This story is begging completion - however you may choose to complete it.

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shariqash

@shariqash

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

After a super crappy day, I had to read this!!! I should've paid heed to ur warning and passed this up since i only and I mean only want to read/know about happy happy stuff...life stinks as it is...but i just had to read it...ur such an amazing writer...

And that was absolutely fabulous...makes me jealous of people like you who can sketch scenes with words and make them beautiful...now please can you give them a happy end? Pretty please???

Thank you very much for the pm...do write often...it's always a pleasure to read something written by you.

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Omg a nandini and aman os
i love it
plz continue

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This is some heart wrenching creativity. I don't know how you and a few other writers on this forum are able to do it. I feel this girls pain in my gut! I love Aman as a character and your Aman has a lot of CHARACTER!!! He is different from other versions I have read. Can't write more at this time but amazing work!!! 👏

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dreamwinner

@dreamwinner

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Love heals and love hurts

And this love is still hurting

And here we r always looking for fairy tale ending

Lovely OS

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Unbelievable.

This is such an awesome os.

The pain both Nandini and Aman were feeling was so sad and you could fell it throughout all your words in this os.

You are selling yourself sort by saying this os is not good.

You have effortlessly portrayed how Nandini feels completely shattered and broken by what has happened to her that she feels she doesn't deserve a normal life.

While Aman who has fallen head over heals in love how he wants to take Nandini away from everything but each time she says no he feels his heart is breaking into two.

It was completely sad how in the end he just walked out leaving money behind because her words to him were the final straw that he couldn't take no.

I do however request you continue with this story and maybe bring about a change in both Nandini and Aman's lives.

Absolutely amazing.

Beautifully written. 👏

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

One more awesome OS - you have a way with dark OSs...

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OHMYYY!

THIS WAS DAMN EPIC!

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I was deff. hooked... as I've barely read anything on them. What are you saying ? This was damn brilliant and man, what a amazing pair they would make- A&N. I'm already thinking about them. For the time, I kind don't like the idea of Aman & Sunehri.. this would be such a better shot @ tugging the powerful plot and will make much more sense, if he was given a case like this and hence, them two coming together @ a powerful situation like this.

I LOVED how realistic and practical you made this according to the storyline which has got to be explored on the case of Nadini and Aman trying to keep his calm and cool, while he's raging inside.. I would love see that diff. side to him.. conflicting emotions- inside and out.
& man, both not knowing that other loves them & Nandu thinking she's disgusting to him- Awhie* well, a realistic thought to her. & the ending! gaah.
You explored this complicated scenario so well.. kudos to you!
please grant them a happy ending- I can't wait to see what happens next- which means please do another shot to this :D

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