Parud FF-Tum se hi Part-4 (upd-01/06/15) Page-10 - Page 9

finish all 4 chapter ...wow👏

OMG! Nishu, this is beautiful yaaarrr...Hayyy kaash iss tarha ka kuch dekhnay ko miltaa toh maza ajata 🤗

I had no idea you are such a prolific and talented writer 😎

Originally posted by: deepsel

Superb update Nishu👏

Loved how you showed Rudra and Paro calm POVs after the incident..Rudra reasoning her still not apologizing😆..Paro lashing first then realizing...so in character with them...lovely to read😳..

I was like 😲 when Rudra revealed about the marriage to Dilsher😆..Top class.

thanks deepusa.

I thought they had enough tandav the previous so thought this is better.
I always think paro is a kind of person who too empathic to actually blame any one who does any harm to her specially Rudra. moreover she respects him and knows he is her protector. also he is the only man she had known this closely and she is developing feelings for him.

Rudra on the other hand feels guilty for putting her through that but I don't think he actually regrets marrying her but he know how he is na, covering the truth with all the roaring😆😆

when rr was running I thought Rudra might tell Dilsher he married like this so I just included that.

Originally posted by: custodian75

Good that you decided to continue with the ff.

A different take from the original but very interesting. Rudr is very much influenced by his childhood. Though in his heart he knew that Paro was innocent and honest, his prejudice came inbetween.

thanks baisa.
Rudra's wounds are so deep, it is clouding his future.

Originally posted by: -Pramila-

finish all 4 chapter ...wow👏

lovely written nishu sa👍🏼

thanks prami.🤗
happy you liked it.

Originally posted by: TitliBaisa

OMG! Nishu, this is beautiful yaaarrr...Hayyy kaash iss tarha ka kuch dekhnay ko miltaa toh maza ajata 🤗

Titli, you came🤗

meri titli aa gayi, meri titli aa gayi * dances around*
kahan chali gayi thi neele panko wali😆😆
waise I do know where you are nowadays.😆😆

thanks yaar❤️

Originally posted by: Betti

I had no idea you are such a prolific and talented writer 😎

I read all four chapters in one sitting( which is unusual for me )

It was a good read, thanks to your fluid writing style, and now I want

more

So Paro never got married to Varun, she is not a widow in you story, did I get that right?

Just bcz she tried to runaway to see her Mamisa who is in danger - it angered Rudra so much - he did the whole saath phere in such a drunken stupor?

Wow, Your Rudra is even more angry and insecure when it comes to Paro than the original Rudra of RR 😃

Interesting ending... Poor Dilsher, leave it to Rudra to deliver a news like that in such a cavalier manner ( although we all know his cavalier attitude is just a cover)

Please update soon 😃

Thanks betti.

nope not married to that good for nothng fellow.
You know how Rudra is , doing stupid things after drinking is his aadath😆😆
kya karoon, wanted them to get married soon aur rudra toh aisa kuch kartha nahi na when he is in hosh😆😆

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

Titli, you came🤗

meri titli aa gayi, meri titli aa gayi * dances around*
kahan chali gayi thi neele panko wali😆😆
waise I do know where you are nowadays.😆😆

thanks yaar❤️

Nishuuu, meri pyari nishu main agai...Main agaiii...Main agai😆😛😛😛

Tum bhi ajao na udherrr...Follow karna shoro kardooo, maza ayegaaa, hum teeno lagiii hoiii hogiii 😉😉🤗🤗🤗

Love you 🤗🤗

You're welcome yaar🤗🤗

Originally posted by: TitliBaisa

Nishuuu, meri pyari nishu main agai...Main agaiii...Main agai😛

Tum bhi ajao na udherrr...Follow karna shoro kardooo, maza ayegaaa, hum teeno lagiii hoiii hogiii 🤗

Love you 🤗🤗

You're welcome yaar🤗🤗

tu aur woh hey toh aana toh padega hi na titli.
missed you so much yaar🤗🤗🤗
yahaan tere bina sab kuch adhura lag raha hai.
I miss all the masti we used to have.
haan yaara theeno mil kar masti karenge waha❤️🤗