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@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Marvel-freak
Rudra thinks nothing happened and then bang the memories come flooding back! Ow yes, Rudra you married her!!!

Lovely writing !!

yeh rudra bhi na😆😆

thanks

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.
Beautiful chapter..👏
Both Rudra and Paro are in some hallucinated world.. Both are seeing each other with different angles
Kakisa..always amazes me with her new schemes...lets see what is she upto?

So finally Rudra told Dilsher about his marriage. I like that but he broke hearing that.😭

the way they met is quite different na so I thought they don't have any reason to not trust each other. thought rudra would have special respect for her as a soldier as she sacrificed everything to put a criminal behind bar. so I thought may be thay might look at situation from the other's point of view too.

kakis is quite a character na. she is just filled with all types of schemes but we all know nothing is gonna work in front of rudra.

Dilsher regrets his actions about filling Rudra's head with all bad views about beautiful woman.

thanks baisa, glad u liked it.

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-
Nishu, I'm so glad you are writing again.
Loved the update.Both of them are true to form. Rudra is finding reasons to stay angry and pretend he doesn't care. And Paro is seeing the best in him and trying to understand his pain.
Waiting for Dilsher to meet his bahu.

thanks Rithu.

Rudra's words and actions never match na😆😆

paro is a pure soul, she puts others before her no matter what her situation is.

Dilsher and paro make a good team na.

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -Mukti-
Since I am late latif on this post I could read all four parts at once.😃 The good news is that I did not have to wait for the next part 😊and the bad news is now I have to wait for part 5.🤔

Now for the FF itself, I thoroughly enjoyed it because of the way you wove the story. You took what happened giving me a visual of that and then went into your version which was so easy to picture as I was able to get into the scene. I like that there are no misunderstandings, like Paro is aware of Tejawat's activities. Rudra seeing beyond the 'khubsoort aurat' and trusting her. You kept the essence of the story intact: PaRud, two souls destined to one, Paro weak woman but strong soul, Rudra strong Man but broken soul. Loved it.👏

thanks mukti.

I just did not want to go with the whole mu track.

I wanted to try how different it would have been for both of them if they were on the same side but still separated by all the notions about beautiful carried by Rudra.

He trusts her and respects her but still there is a barrier.

I wanted that but don't know where it will go. the problem is I have an outline of story in my mind but when I write it just goes somewhere else totally different from what I actually intended😆😆

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aaliah3108

@aaliah3108

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

hey Nishu !!

It is a gorgeous update dear. Paro starting to feel the inner turmoil of the Major . You have depicted it really well. And I also liked how Rudra realised his mistake when he woke up the next day ...as to how he had ended up marrying her but he is not sorry of course !! 😆

Upar upar ka jhut mut ka gussa haii aur kya ...wase toh he wants her aas paas only. !!😉 hain na !

The charm of ur story is like I earlier said is that it is very simple and does not carry heavy duty stuff ! It's like fluff !! I love ur writing style. Waiting for next udpate already.

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Navya

@Navyya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Nishu!An outstanding update...liked the flow of events that made Rudra marry Paro much more in this chapter than the way it was shown in the show & the best part is that you showed it without Rudra having to resign from BSD,he still holds his rank & this was the best part. It used to break my heart to see him without his badges in the show.

Now even Paro is becoming aware of the feelings that crop up with regards to Rudra...her mind & heart is confused...awww...this was so beautiful.

Loved how you have zeroed in on the three nerve zones of the show in this chapter skilfully & kept their essence (1) interactions between gentle Paro & obstinate Rudra 3) his rebuttal of kakisa & one liners with her (3) his nonchalant way of talking with his father. I literally put my hands on my mouth with the way he broke the news of his wedding to him.You made me smile like a psycho reading that part.

Thanks Nishu. Looking forward to the rest of the story.You are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.

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@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: aaliah3108
hey Nishu !!
It is a gorgeous update dear. Paro starting to feel the inner turmoil of the Major . You have depicted it really well. And I also liked how Rudra realised his mistake when he woke up the next day ...as to how he had ended up marrying her but he is not sorry of course !! 😆

Upar upar ka jhut mut ka gussa haii aur kya ...wase toh he wants her aas paas only. !!😉 hain na !

The charm of ur story is like I earlier said is that it is very simple and does not carry heavy duty stuff ! It's like fluff !! I love ur writing style. Waiting for next udpate already.

🤣🤣

just like paro says, major saab toh paro ki odani ke moti ki tharah uske peeche peche goomthe rahthe hai but kya kare he still shouts I hate khoobsurat aurat every two mins😆😆

thanks ruchu sa.🤗

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Nishu!An outstanding update...liked the flow of events that made Rudra marry Paro much more in this chapter than the way it was shown in the show & the best part is that you showed it without Rudra having to resign from BSD,he still holds his rank & this was the best part. It used to break my heart to see him without his badges in the show.

Now even Paro is becoming aware of the feelings that crop up with regards to Rudra...her mind & heart is confused...awww...this was so beautiful.

Loved how you have zeroed in on the three nerve zones of the show in this chapter skilfully & kept their essence (1) interactions between gentle Paro & obstinate Rudra 3) his rebuttal of kakisa & one liners with her (3) his nonchalant way of talking with his father. I literally put my hands on my mouth with the way he broke the news of his wedding to him.You made me smile like a psycho reading that part.

Thanks Nishu. Looking forward to the rest of the story.You are doing an amazing job. Keep it up.

thanks Ritu.🤗

I hated it when he lost his badge too.
Rudra is just not Rudra without the badge na.

both are confused souls, one more than the other. Paro is much more accepting but rudra uff he is just too scarred by the wounds that his mother left that it is harder for him.

I just love the one liners he gives kaisa. I am just a sucker for those.😆😆

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Deepa

@deepsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Superb update Nishu👏

Loved how you showed Rudra and Paro calm POVs after the incident..Rudra reasoning her still not apologizing😆..Paro lashing first then realizing...so in character with them...lovely to read😳..

I was like 😲 when Rudra revealed about the marriage to Dilsher😆..Top class.

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Good that you decided to continue with the ff.

A different take from the original but very interesting. Rudr is very much influenced by his childhood. Though in his heart he knew that Paro was innocent and honest, his prejudice came inbetween.

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