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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Nice chapter.. Both Rudra and Paro are in dilemma.. Rudra trying to see Paro in different light and Paro trying to justify Rudra's actions..

Kakisa.. What is she upto now..

Best part was how Rudra informed dilsher about his marriage.. Poor dilsher.. Got the shock of his life.. I loved how he told that he trusts Paro.. But he will not say this easily in front of Paro.. Such a stubborn man..

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thakurpreeti

@thakurpreeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Nice n lovely update, than 4 pm

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Marvel-freak

@Marvel-freak

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Rudra thinks nothing happened and then bang the memories come flooding back! Ow yes, Rudra you married her!!!

Lovely writing !!

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Beautiful chapter..👏

Both Rudra and Paro are in some hallucinated world.. Both are seeing each other with different angles
Kakisa..always amazes me with her new schemes...lets see what is she upto?

So finally Rudra told Dilsher about his marriage. I like that but he broke hearing that.😭

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Nishu, I'm so glad you are writing again.
Loved the update.Both of them are true to form. Rudra is finding reasons to stay angry and pretend he doesn't care. And Paro is seeing the best in him and trying to understand his pain.
Waiting for Dilsher to meet his bahu.

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Mukti

@-Mukti-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Since I am late latif on this post I could read all four parts at once.😃 The good news is that I did not have to wait for the next part 😊and the bad news is now I have to wait for part 5.🤔

Now for the FF itself, I thoroughly enjoyed it because of the way you wove the story. You took what happened giving me a visual of that and then went into your version which was so easy to picture as I was able to get into the scene. I like that there are no misunderstandings, like Paro is aware of Tejawat's activities. Rudra seeing beyond the 'khubsoort aurat' and trusting her. You kept the essence of the story intact: PaRud, two souls destined to one, Paro weak woman but strong soul, Rudra strong Man but broken soul. Loved it.👏

Edited by -Mukti- - 10 years ago

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: nanor
simply amazing
loved it,.

thanks baisa.

I am so glad you like it.

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Lily30
Loved the update 👏
Thank you for the pm 🤗
Loved how Paro trying to understand Rudra 😃

paro is such a pure soul na.

she gets hurt but still tries to understand the person who hurt her.

thanks baisa.

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Cutemithra
Nice chapter.. Both Rudra and Paro are in dilemma.. Rudra trying to see Paro in different light and Paro trying to justify Rudra's actions..

Kakisa.. What is she upto now..

Best part was how Rudra informed dilsher about his marriage.. Poor dilsher.. Got the shock of his life.. I loved how he told that he trusts Paro.. But he will not say this easily in front of Paro.. Such a stubborn man..

they both are trying but their past specially Rudra's won't allow him to admit how much paro matters to him. he respects her and trusts her but it is pushed down by all the hatred that he has developed for khoobsurat woman.

thanks baisa.