New OS - All of You - Page 3

Rangprab, Jyoti & Parud143: Thank you

Custodian: True That! Love cannot be forced. TQ for liking the OS.

Harsha: Didn't you receive my PM for this one ? TQ for your love.

Deepa: I am glad the CVs kept the episodes sort of sensible though I could do with more understanding from Paro, which I knew wouldn't happen cos of TRPs or whatever. Its sad that the FL must always be as white as milk & able to bear more & more to become a diamond figuratively.

Originally posted by: What_the

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What a lovely piece DDC1 baisa, it was poignant and moving.

You expressed Rudra's pain and frustration beautifully.. His candid confession of his inability to forgive, his honest acceptance of his need for her, the fact that he is not angry with her trying to get him to face his past, he is merely trying to explain to her that he just cannot do it...

The way he physically seeks comfort by lying in her lap, like he once did from his mother was nicely done...

This was touchingly beautiful and I would be thrilled to see such an open and free expression of emotions on the show...in fact I thought Rudra admitting that her love was enough for him, it is what kept him going, was quite sweet...may be we will see more such scenes going forward...

Thank you for writing such a brilliant OS😊

Love

maya

Originally posted by: LivesInHope

Hi

Thanks for pm and so sorry for not being to read sooner.

Life had me tied up away from my dear writers.

But I'm back now!

Ahhh I love the " pari"

I've liked the comments which have long said what I'd have done now.

Il just add that you bared rudras soul so touchingly and completely to paro.

I can really feel all his childhood loss abandonment grief confusion and sheer pain at his mothers departure.

Further compounded and deepened by the twisted bitter mind of the father who then raised him emotionally crippled and devoid of the capacity to love.

Believing himself to be undeserving of being loved otherwise his mother would not have left him, would she? He always told himself that.

Then The constant humiliation and taunts he had to face as he grew up feeling shamed and rejected.

Then the mans anger determination and hard resolve to never ever forgive her.

His determined battening down his defence hatches in front of the anticipated requests from his wife to forgive his mother knowing she is his only weakness.

The sole chink in his armour.

He cannot allow her to penetrate through and break his resolve.

You have taken a jallad.

A man totally unable to connect or relate or build and sustain a relationship with another human being and brought him back into human form to the opposite point of where he began and enabled him to surrender himself to the depths of his soul to another person.

A beautiful woman at that.

The sworn never to be trusted enemy, until just recently.

Wah!

A brilliant OS

Thanks

Samina

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